darko.demark666

Hi, me again...... On a lonesome night Wintry, crisp – remote Tumbled notes of faith From an inky cloak. As the frost-buds dropped On the slumb'ring loam Well done. All ...

Welcome to YWS, a world of confusion, pain and happiness... I have a li'l demon in me, li'l isn't correct... it roars for freedom. It wants out. I cannot keep ...

Hi..and welcome! Casper here.....I'll review your work.... ....what? ...ok, ok... :) Let's sit here in nature and watch those birds bash their heads against the trees. Here you have two ...

Hey, buddy....how are you? Saw your poem I don't know where so I read it...and here's the review...not much of it..lol Splinters Shattered into splinters, the shards of my heart ...

Cheer up little one, don't be [s]too[/s] sad. Instead of your fate, think of the life you once had. I'm sorry for the abrupt, AN unexpected ending. I know how ...

So, this is for Rosey's Contest: I stared at the red flames dancing on a silent beautiful melody, period could use better here It's warm battled the freezing night, It ...

For Rosey's contest . Touching THE sea and touching THE light, dancing through a breathless night, or restless night separating something fright'ning from the carpet where I stand. 'Round me ...

Yeah...if you want humor you can jump to forum and search for it. It has a lot of funny stuff. In case you didn't notice, this is were "boring" poems ...

You upload your works in your portfolio by creating maps, like eg. Lyric poetry or lyrics or fiction... You simply select the picture for the map and just reload the ...

Good morning, sunshine ! I’m feeling warm today and I think It’s got something to do with the Subtle glow of the faint words Which rest on the translucent screen ...

Lovable and foolish at the same time... You have a great sense for words...you're like Shakespeare-totally. But this rhyming scheme is to difficult to master. Really, it all seems so ...

Hatred rains in drops that scorch, Murder crawls in rivers that torch. Vengeance falls in flakes that choke, Pain pummels in rocks that smoke. Cruelty gathers in clouds that sting ...

Candle lit fires Walks in the park A carousel in the moonlight Sex on the beach doesn't fit well..the flow of the poem is hurt here. Dreams upon a mountain ...

welcome to YWS. The Lemon-Yellow Sun ... Bad idea to write your review in WORD. LOL... But I can tell you that I was looking for older works who haven't ...

where the finish line lies. Whaaaaaaaaaat? ;) The pain I had taken instead Of live and love, Not forsaken, Given as I am to Him! Well, this was too much ...