dante93

I did not really like this poem. It is actually kind of comical to me. Not theme mind you, but the delivery. It sounds to me like there is nothing ...

This poem was interesting, though the delivery was a bit so-so. As said before I understand the idea, but it seems as though the idea was not expanded enough. I ...

I agree with StoryWeaver. This poem seemed a bit to angst ridden for me. It also seemed a but vague. It evoked some weird emotions and overall was somewhat confusing. ...

I thought this poem was okay. I can definitely relate to it, but the language and they way it is set up seems a bit choppy and weird throughout the ...

This is a good poem. The only thing is, the "innocent" usually aren't. And they usually go for the bad ones. I would know from experience. I am damaged, tainted, ...

I love the irony in this poem! Your eyes are opened, but you are a willing slave. Hilarious! Absolutely hilarious. It is sad too, but it is funny. The poem ...

This was a good poem, dark, but good. It had a weird flow, but I could deal with it. The message was pretty clear, and it was overall well written. ...

Something bothers me about this poem as well. It seems as though it is more surreal than it should be. From the first stanza to the second the transition seems ...

I liked this poem because I can relate. I think we've all been there, but this: Everything in between is pointless. Wasted efforts. This thought has broken me, Torn up ...

This poem was good. Sounded like my dreams. There, however, is a Poet's land, our minds. That is the true land in which we all live in, writers that is. ...

This poem was great. I know some people will say that description is vague as above, but I felt the meaning, and understood it perfectly. Not all poetry is about ...

This poem didn't seem very good to me. I thought it was a little childish actually. I'm sorry if that offends you, but this poem's tone seems like a just ...

Here's a few suggestions on a title: I, The Lost One , Where Has My Life Gone , Love, Life, and my Misery , Heart: Lost From Me . I ...

I thought this poem was okay. It was written in a way easy to understand, but it lacked the structure which makes a poem great. It seemed to me the ...

This poem was good overall, but there were some errors with punctuation and so forth. I can't tell you how you will do it, but a suggestion that I have ...