danipower0204

The gates stood open, Open to hell. And there he stood, He who from heaven fell. There stood I, in front of him, He who fell from the skies. I ...

I also really liked this. I see now I should I shouldn't have told you, how I felt inside. The should and shouldn't...typo I'm guessing? Anyway, I agree with the ...

Hi there! Here to review. OK, I kind of like this piece of poetry. There's something about it. I just don't know what. Her fierce red coat, Illuminated by the ...

I like the rhyme in this. I agree its quite lyrical actually. I thought it was also quite moving. One thing that I am picky on though is rhythm and ...

I like this poem. I like your rhyming scheme, although it changes in the last stanza where you have A/A/B/B/C instead of A/A/A/A/C. Anyway, I don't think there's much more ...

Passing between years That special moment With that special person In that special place of hers. Atop of a building we sat And looked at the skies Waiting for the ...

Hi there! Firstly I really like this. There is an air of, I can't really describe, but there definitely something about it that I really like! Now if I was ...

Wow. I instantly knew what the topic was. I really liked the poem. I think you used the words well, especially some of the alliteration and a few rhymes were ...

OK. So I would definitely like to read more of this. My main problem with this was - you are telling, not showing. You could easily expand this I'm sure. ...

Haha! This got me to chuckle inside and out. I was actually expecting something quite different when I started reading, and then I got into it and it flipped 180 ...

Wow I really like this poem. Not sure it works as well lyrical poetry as it does as just poetry in and of itself. But yes, I really do like ...

HAHA this was realy funny. Started reading it as a really serious poem, but the ending just made it great! Great turn at the end. And yes, I agree with ...

Merry Christmas! Want me to review? I'll do it either way. I liked it. I liked that you had a constant rhyme ending, "ee". I also liked the repetition, it ...

I like the way it's written. I also like the pace of the action. It could use with a little more description, but that's just my point of view. I ...

Wow, what a read. Please keep writing more. I liked the mosnter POV, and I definitely want to know what she looks like, what she is. Actually I'm much more ...