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Re: A Broken Mind
She tells me--No, she yells, letting every frozen tear roll out her mouth. And she lets them shatter at my feet. But I still listen when she tells me. I ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: Once Again
To be the droplet of water , descending from a gull’s wing falling, splitting, time abating Silvery moonlight, glittering through the rain serenity reaches the night once again. Love this ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: a dream of what we almost were
I loved it. I did. It had a very nice flow in my opinion. I love the wording that you used. I actually don't knows specifically what it was about ...
Aug 3, 2011 -
Re: When needs change
A rock to fill the vacancy is a shape shifter bec ause the rock will be a different shape at different times, depending on climate and tide. I kind of ...
Jul 21, 2011 -
Re: The Tiny Heart’s Story.
There once lived a Tiny Heart, as tiny as tiny can be. Hidden amidst the crowd, she was often hard to see. She had many Hearts, who were her friends, ...
Jul 21, 2011 -
Re: Presence.
Press provides powerful presence. Perhaps passion, and peace lost to propaganda. Probably: people protest what they can't possess or process. I agree. Patterns prove promising process es of the Past ...
Jul 21, 2011 -
Re: My Last Hand
It doesn't matter how hearts are cold with all my bad cards I did never fold My friend asked if love she, but I've never answered with a me It ...
Jul 20, 2011 -
Re: A Night Forgotten
She laughs and giggles at my Southern drawl--- thick from drink, pronounced and rolling slowly off the tongue. Those two last lines - I don't get them. What is rolling ...
Jul 20, 2011 -
Re: What I Left
Deceiving eyes deceitful lies, What’s left of ourselves is nothing more than our imagination. We pleaded with each other not to walk away, But when the words came out I ...
Jul 20, 2011 -
Re: I tried
I though I loved you, but you hurt me, I tried to love you and, all you gave me was pain, you made me happy for awhile, but messed it ...
Jul 20, 2011 -
Re: Sin
Great poem, I really enjoyed it. Even though I'm not religious, I like the ethereal quality to this poem. You illustrate "Good" and "Bad" quite well here, and how our ...
Jul 19, 2011 -
Re: Dr. Strangellama
Fun! A little dissappointing in the end, though. The whole "thinking about"...doesn't really work well, make it more relevant. I know you're trying to be random, but still. And also, ...
Jun 30, 2011 -
Re: Mermaids
Nice! I enjoyed this. When I think about mermaids, I don't think about the kiddy, silly creations, but the dark, seductive, evil killer mermaids. 'Tis true. I just wish this ...
Jun 6, 2011 -
Re: Just for you.
OK, I'll get straight to my opinion. This didn't really feel like a poem. Yes poetry is very diverse and free, but this felt more like something you would actually ...
Jun 4, 2011 -
Re: Always and forever
Never say 'I Love You' If you really do not care. Never talk about having feelings, If they aren't truly there! Never hold my hand If you're just gonna break ...
Jun 4, 2011
