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Before I read the spoiler, I could have sworn you were writing in the mind of a schizophrenic. Like, a voice is telling them to go hit a car or ...

I don't think I've read something quite this brilliant in forever. It's amazing. I love the context of it. I also love the rhyming, and just how it sounds! It ...

So I had to look up the word noose like a dork, and I reread your poem with my new knowledge -- and I love it! I think you captured ...

The first thing I'd like to know is just what you're talking about. It's a great poem, and I like the mystery, but it's confusing. Maybe you should clarify on ...

Wow, this was really well written. I love the message and the rhyming. The message isn't really one you see very often, and I think it should be seen just ...

First off, I love the repetition and the rhyming. Very unique. I love the picture it paints in my mind as well, pretty damn vivid. I love everything about this! ...

Oh wow, I loved this. I totally loved this. Very, very well written, and it reminds me of nursery rhymes. I love it! I also love how you can rhyme ...

Very emotional! I liked how I could pick out the rhythm as soon as I started in on it. It's very mysterious, and I've read it over like five times, ...

I love this. Very gentle and strongly emotional. You should add more to it - why did she have her heart broken? Who broke her heart? Was it love that ...

I really liked the message you have. A few things that drew me off: But now look upon her, a princess, Perfectly adorned in the finest, The things my own ...

Unfortunately, I know exactly how the narrator is feeling. Anyway, there are a few things that I didn't really care for in this. The sentences seemed a bit awkward, as ...

I've just reread your writing like, three times now to find out what to say, because I was just speechless. Your rhyme scheme was excellent. The AABB scheme is somewhat ...

Oh freaking wow. That is breathtaking. It really is. Confusing, yet leaves you in awe. The description was just brilliant. I love how in the first stanza, fourth line you ...

I love this. I really do. It reminds me of a metaphor; like, the narrator is Mother Nature or something. The confusion you give off is brilliant, and not like ...

I can't relate to this, because I've been to the same school all my life, but just imagining moving schools and places so much makes me want to scream. I ...