curiousvampire

Pesonally I thought this was great. Your MC has a good personalty and I like him. All in all it was interesting except you had a few mistakes that I ...

This was seriously otherwordly and magiacal..... dude you totally blew my mind with this piece. They were no mistakes that I spotted and the coposition was solid and sweet. Can't ...

Awe struck and daze, this was actually good. Good job!

I see a ton of potential this story, but its short and I seriously wanted more. All you really gave me was descriptions, little dialogue and background. Add more, so ...

Thanks for the reviews! I'll update as soon as possible.

Amazing in every refined detail! A great begining to hopefully to a great story to unfold.

I'm loving it! It was finely written and up to par. Wierd and intriguing, you hook me by the first sentece alone. Thanks for the read Crescent.

Harry Potter remenise. It really reminded me of Harry Potter, but I have a feeling its going to be different. Pm me please when you write more. Thank you for ...

Its good. I like, but its a little too fast, you skipped their entire life to adulthood and I wish you had a little more detail with descriptions. But all ...

Great story, sad beginning and ending. In other words I loved it. No huge errors that The New Hero already pointed out. Keep writing and I'll keep reading, becuase I ...

I'm a huge 'Harry Potter' fanatic and I loved this piece. Thank You for the read and the hard work you put into this. Good Job!

Can you spell perfection. It was simple and beautiful I liked the love/hate thing going on and it tickeled my funny bone. Please write more!

Well, I didn't spot any errors in this piece, so I guess Meep, Isha and Esme already covered them. I loved all your chapters so far, there all interesting and ...

I liked it. Your story was simple, but powerful in a sense. I wish you had more detail in your MC.

Hey there your story was good; definitely liking material. I've never heard of The New Tomorrow and now I really want to know more about it. Please write some more, ...