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this is the beginning of chapter 1 for this story i just want to know what you guys think x

I sat at the computer just staring at the screen waiting for the fimiliar chime of a msn message when It came

IzzyissoBizzy: Heyy

Raven: Hiia

Izzyissobizzy: how ya doin??x

Raven ;okay, but I can feel something bad coming it’s worrying me L

Izzyissobizzy: you and your sensing things you are not psychic I repeat you are not psychic!!

Raven; I dunno…anyway I have much more chance of being psychic than you becoming the next Shakira

Izzyissobizzy: oi!!, you are right tho you have much more chance of being phychic and Shakira x, your , beautiful, a brill singer and a brill dancer lol x

Raven: yea right, lol but im telling you something bad is going to happen got to go now anyway bye!

Raven : signed off

I was Raven and im sure something bad was going to happen I didn’t know what and I didn’t know were last time I had a feeling like this the Haiti earthquake took place Isabella was my best friend she was the only person who was always there for me I live in a 3 bed roomed house with my Dad, Stepmother, and baby step-sister and lets say it the baby was the only one who got attention in this house I was forgotten just left to rot. my actual Mum died 3 years ago no one found out how she died she had been on a pamper weekend in London and was staying in a log cabin then the morning after she had arrived she had been found dead I was devastated but I had a strong feeling it was going to happen the night she died I had had a dream of a woman stood in the log cabin facing my mum, my mum was screaming and then there was a flash of light after that I woke up.

I walked down the stairs I had been up early and the rest of the household was still asleep so I headed down stairs and put the kettle on then the TV I remembered that I had to iron my school uniform for tomorrow so I did that then sat on the couch for a while until the post came through I headed for the door then saw a coffee coloured envelope which had a scarlet wax stamp on it I picked it up carefully and looked at who it was addressed to

Raven Barrows

Wn4Ahg

St Trea Street

Wigan

I opened the letter and studied it carefully

Dear Raven,

You have been chosen to attend St Percivals School for Witches and Wizards your belongings will be packed straight away and your parents have been notified you will be picked up at 12 O’clock in the afternoon on the 3rd of September 2009.

Mr Talon

The Third of September was Today and 12 O’clock was only an hour away I shouldn’t believe it I should think it was a joke but the feelings I get and the dream I had before my mum died made me believe It was true. I ran upstairs to my room and got the shock of my life it was empty with only my bright pink suitcase and matching travel bag in the corner I couldn’t get over it I was a witch and I didn’t even know I checked the time on my watch and found it was half past eleven then I noticed I was still in my pyjamas. I quickly rummaged through my suitcase and found my deep purple tracksuit and quickly put it on I did my hair then waited, I didn’t know what to wait for I kept checking my watch then at soon at it reached twelve there was a car horn that sounded outside I knew it was what I had been waiting for I grabbed the suitcase and bag pack and headed out towards a black minibus with its doors open as if they awaited me, which they were as I stood inside there was a group of boys and girls chatting excitedly as if they knew exactly what was going on so I just sat there by myself saying over and over “ Raven you’re a witch this is real” to myself we arrived sooner than I thought to our destination… a large black plane was waiting for us the doors to the mini bus opened and we all poured out and ran onto the plane I was massive and packed with fifteen year old kids again all talking like they knew what was going on. I walked down the walkway of the plane to the back were there were a row of four seats, three were occupied so I asked if I could sit in the spare seat and a blonde girl with grass green eyes who gave me a warm smile said “Yea of course, I could use some company” then gestured a two boys sat next to her they both looked up at me and said “hi!” one had spiky auburn hair with sapphire blue eyes the other had scruffy black hair with lime green eyes. I sat down and waited in silence for the plane to set of, five minutes later the plane slowly began to move and the girl next to me handed me a boiled sweet to suck on so my ears wouldn’t hurt it was lime flavoured I savoured the taste because I hadn’t had a boiled sweet in a while. As soon as we were in the air the girl suggested we all introduce ourselves I agreed because I figured making friends would be best way to start my new life…

The boy with auburn hair went first and introduced himself “my name is James I come from London I am fifteen and I’m totally awesome!” he gave us a cheeky smile then the black haired boy went “ My name is Daniel and I’m also fifteen I went to boarding school with James and by the way he’s not awesome” we all laughed at that then the blonde haired girl had her turn “ My name is Mercy-Jinx I come from Newcastle an like the rest of you I am fifteen” the boy’s started laughing at Mercy-Jinx’s name but she just told them to shut up after that I realised it was my turn to go so I went for it “My name is Raven I come from Wigan and I had no idea I was a witch..” I thought I had said something wrong when they turned round and looked at me like I was stupid.

oh yea i was wondering if you could come uo with a title i'm rubbish when comes to thinking them up