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Re: Not How We Dreamed
Hey, I'm here for a review! First off, amazing job! I love the concept of this; how real life differs from stories. And your approach to writing this, and how ...
Feb 1, 2016 -
Re: By the age of
Hey, I'm here for a review! Sorry that it's a little short, but I'm making this on my phone and it's hard to type out sections. Hope you understand! So, ...
Jan 12, 2016 -
Re: HolographicLadybug's Class on Seriousism
Hey, I'm here for a review (of sorts)! I laughed so much through this! It was AMAZING! Like seriously, you crack me up. Not even kidding. Like for example I ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: It is My Nature
Hey, I'm here for a review! I really, really, really liked this! I liked how you developed your main idea and nature theme using an example all the way through, ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Elise (written about a real person- one of my best friends)
Hey, I'm here for a review! Oh. My. God. You literally just described how I am currently feeling about one of my friends. . . One of my best friends, ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Just a thought
Hey, I'm here for a review! You are absolutely right, religion is a very sensitive topic. I being a Christian myself have felt this way a lot this year, since ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Instinct - Chapter 3
Hey, I'm here for a review! First off, and most importantly, I just want to tell you I haven't read the first couple of chapters, so I apologize ahead of ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Do you?
Hey, I'm here for a review! Okay, first off, I really like your ideas you have in this. It's truly a really good first start. One thing I would say ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Dark Society
Hey, I'm here for a review! I just want to say I'm sorry ahead of time, I don't have a lot of criticism for this. I really loved this. You ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: A Whiter Cloud
Hey, I'm here for a review! I really liked the concept for this poem! I loved how you paired emotions with nature and natural cycles like the water cycle, or ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: The Wind beneath my Wings
Hey, I'm here for a review! I really, really, really liked this! I think the reason I liked it so much is because of the perspective you used. The bird ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: End It
Hey, I'm here for a review! I really liked this. Your themes that you put across in this poem really hit home with a lot of people, including myself. You ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: The place where we can not stop to rest
Hey, I'm here for a review! Okay, so first off, I love the concept of this. I don't see a lot of literary pieces talking about city life very often, ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Drip, Drop
Hey, I'm here for a review! Sorry if this is a little short! Anyways, I love the format!!! I think it adds a lot to your concept, and gives the ...
Dec 24, 2015 -
Re: you told me all about her
I absolutely loved this! Your writing is so addictive, (no pun intended.) My interpretation of this is that the narrator was friends with a guy. This guy was in a ...
Nov 30, 2015
