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  • Article / Essay » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Storytelling, Suffering, and God: A writers perspective

    Hey, crobbins here for a review! I'm always wary of reading pieces about religion, but this one I actually really loved to read! I actually support your idea very much. ...

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Voices of the Ice: Chapter 4

    Hey, crobbins here for another review! So, I haven't read your other chapters, so I can't really review plot development (sorry). So, this character is interesting. Your description of them ...

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General Re: Mountain Wind

    Hey, crobbins here for a review! First off, I love your voice! I think this is well written, but I did see some hiccups in the writing. First thing, as ...

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Becoming a Good rider

    Hey, crobbins here for a review! So, I am not a horseback rider, and am ashamed to say I have thought before that horseriding was "easy." HOWEVER, I am glad ...

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Immortal Warrior

    Hey, crobbins here for another review! So wow, Alzheimer's is a very touchy topic. Yet you managed to express it beautifully in telling the story of this woman. It is ...

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: Reconstruction after the civil war

    Hey, crobbins here for a review! Not gonna lie, I do not know as much about the civil war (or this aspect) as you obviously do. So, with that in ...

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Other » Narrative, Realistic Re: My Grandpa Died on Monday

    Hey, crobbins here for a review! Wow, it takes a lot of courage to post your story on here. Sharing something so intimate and private as family deaths can be ...

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: 'When I Think Of You' - Chapter 6

    Hey, crobbins here for a review! So I haven't read the previous chapters (sorry) but when I write reviews on chapters when I haven't read the previous chapters I tend ...

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Art » Other, Theatre Re: Nature's beauty

    Hey, crobbins here for a review! So first off, I love the idea of this poem! Everyone deserves to image themselves in a place as serene as this every now ...

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Ascension: Nyx 3 (The Myriad book 1)

    Hey, crobbins here for another review! When I haven't read the previous chapters of a series, I tend to just look for spelling and grammar/formatting issues. So I'll list those ...

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Poetry » Literature, Dramatic Re: Who I Am

    Hey, crobbins here for another review! So I love the message behind this! I interpret this as maybe someone has changed in a relationship. Maybe they were not who they ...

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: birds.

    Hey, crobbins here for a review! I love the idea behind this. The symbolism of the bird and the song create a strong meaning which I can follow along with. ...

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: the parades

    Hey, it's crobbins here for another review! So I actually REALLY love this piece! It reminded me of my childhood very much- I lived near a main street in my ...

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Fishing Trip

    Hey, it's crobbins here for another majestic and glorious review: First off, WELCOME FRIEND! If I read correctly, this is your first piece you posted! WELCOME TO THE YWS FAMILY! ...

    Nov 17, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Guilt

    Hey, Crobbins here. I don't have time for a review, so I'll leave you a nice lil' short-review instead. From reading the previous reviews, I don't have to cover much ...

    Nov 17, 2016


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