-
Re: Sakura 🌸
Kaori lived a good life, at least. She cared so much about the beauty of life and all around her. At least Kaori got to see the sakuras before she ...
Sep 18, 2023 -
Re: Dreamless (0)
I sense that there is something off about Caitlin’s life. She was homeschooled by a staff, which implies that her parents have a lot of money. Her parents hosted parties ...
Sep 17, 2023 -
Re: Expecto Patronum
It’s been a while since I’ve watched the Harry Potter movies and read the books. This poem makes me want to get back into the Harry Potter fandom. You’ve described ...
Sep 16, 2023 -
Re: In the elevator: With myself (part 2)
Kara let go of her past! She’s free. :> It will take time to be completely free, but for the most part, she’s free! Kara helped her younger self, the ...
Sep 15, 2023 -
Re: In the elevator: with myself
I like how the other two Karas are representations of Kara’s thoughts. (At least, I think they are). The younger Kara is mocking Kara for her fears. The older Kara ...
Sep 14, 2023 -
Re: The Origins of a Phrase
This is a dark story for such a ridiculous phrase. I like it! I wonder if deep down, Queen Loireth wanted her son to die because she didn’t like his ...
Sep 13, 2023 -
Re: Not My Circus: Chapter 16
Oh no…Keith is in trouble. On one hand, he could tell them that he and Molly are from Earth. Maybe they’ll be annoyed, but they might help because he took ...
Sep 12, 2023 -
Re: Not My Circus: Chapter 15
Keith likes himself! Yayyy! I’m so happy that he’s accepting his clownliness, because it is AWESOME. Of course Molly was the only one who wasn’t scared of the wvyern. Classic ...
Sep 11, 2023 -
Re: Unraveling Han River
That was absolutely horrifying. I liked it! I didn’t expect that ending, either. This is definitely really spooky… I’ll try to interpret the riddle to the best of my ability: ...
Sep 10, 2023 -
Re: The Interlude-Chapter 6 - The Letter (part 3) (Good Omens Fanfic)
So he read the whole letter? Everything that Aziraphale had to say, all laid out for Crowley. Aziraphale wants to be with him. Crowley wants the same, but isn’t sure ...
Sep 9, 2023 -
Re: An All Consuming Hunger
It had me on the edge of my seat. I liked it! The ending was unexpected, too. I thought that Chet would look at the painting of Katherine, but he ...
Sep 8, 2023 -
Re: The Ugly Things that Dwell in Absolute Silence
That was certainly creepy! I liked it. :> From what I got, the monster is the inner darkness that is in humanity. Succumbing to it would mean losing oneself, which ...
Sep 7, 2023 -
Re: Boogeyman—A Prose Poem
I like this! Yes, The Boogeyman never quite goes away, not even as we grow. It twists into more adult fears, but all the same, still the same feeling of ...
Sep 6, 2023 -
Re: Hybrids: Chapter 19
Sako isn’t coming back, that’s for sure. This chapter was so intense, I liked it. Maybe the others could all start to pull off the tracker chips and leave, one ...
Sep 5, 2023 -
Re: Hyrbids: Chapter 18
What they were telling Sako doesn’t make any sense. Why would they keep him locked away? I didn’t know that everyone had trackers on, either. It’s probably for their own ...
Sep 4, 2023
