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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Opened Eyes

    Hello there! I'm Rose, and I'm here to review this piece for you today. First, welcome to YWS. I hope that you like it here as much as I do. ...

    Apr 14, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Scars

    Hello there. I'm Rose, and I'm going to review this piece for you. Overall, this is a good piece of work. You have a way of creating interesting characters without ...

    Apr 14, 2013
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: Shadows

    Hello, Angelrose! I'm Rose, and I'm here to review this piece for you today. First, welcome to YWS. I hope that you like it here as much as I do. ...

    Apr 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Trapped

    Hello, Kitty. I'm Rose, and I'm going to review this piece for you today. First, welcome to YWS. I hope that you'll like it here as much as I do. ...

    Apr 14, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: The Days we Forget to Love- *Prologue* *Edited*

    Hey, Sparky! :D Overall, I love this piece. You've managed to make me like both of your characters without necessarily making me like the things that they're doing. That's impressive. ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Other » Narrative, Teen Fiction Re: The thing about clouds is that they float.

    Hello, Spinelli. I'm Rose, and I'm here to review this piece. :D Overall, I liked this piece. When I'm reading anything, I'm constantly searching for interesting words used in interesting ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Short Story » General, General Re: You Can't Imagine

    Hello there, Munchkin. I'm Rose, and I'm here to share my thoughts on this piece. Overall, this is a nice piece of work. My favorite part of it is the ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Sky is Never the Same

    Hello there, Yubbies! I'm Rose, and I'm here to review this piece. :D Overall, this piece has potential. I've read quite a few pieces that have resembled it - works ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Can't Wait

    Hello there, Fang! I'm Rose, and I'm here to review this piece! :D This is an adorable piece. It made me smile; it's always great when a piece of writing ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Icy Eyes

    Hello there, Monkey! My name's Rose, and I'm here to offer my thoughts on this piece. :D Overall, I like this song. My favorite part of it is the feeling ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Vines

    Hey, Katherine! I'm Rosie. :D This is a cool piece. It's shorter than most of the poetry works that I read around here, but it's still interesting and charming. Nice ...

    Dec 22, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Working on one

    Hello! You asked me for my thoughts concerning this, so I'm here to deliver. :) First, I'm not exactly sure why YWS isn't allowing you to break this down into ...

    Dec 4, 2012
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Seeing Distance

    Hey! I'm back. :) You posted on my wall asking me to return and see if I could find any grammatical errors, so here I am. "They’re all enjoining the ...

    Dec 4, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Untitled for now

    Hello there, Trinity! You left a review request on my wall, so I'm here to take you up on it. :) Before I begin, please keep in mind that the ...

    Dec 3, 2012
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: My Little Invalid

    Hello, Noel! You posted a review request on my wall, so I'm here to, well, review this piece. :) Overall, this is a great piece of work. You kept me ...

    Dec 2, 2012


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