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Hey, Splodey! Not much to say. That was incredibly to the point. I loved it. Gold star.(:

Splodey! Let me just start by saying, that is so sweet. Gold star. I definitely agree with Lily on the first stanza about the "refuse", but other than that, I ...

Thanks so much! I'll fix that right now!

That was grrrrreat! :P Keep working hard. Gold star!

Good job! Gold star. I love the absolute creativity in this poem.

Eraqio, dear, that was simply amazing. I loved the whole of it all. It was so dreamingly real. I believe you have much more potential. Keep working hard.

Thanks for the advice. It was just some random song I made up on the spot.

Thanks for the advice, guys. I'll try to do that in the future.

Hey, Lulu. That was great;gold star!

Thanks for the tips, Galerius. I'll try not to write such things on the spot anymore.

Thanks for all the help guys.

Thanks for the advice, Suzanne. I'll look into fixing things like that in future things.

thanks you guys.

Hey guys, thanks again. I'll fix that in the future.

Thanks for all your help. Kissthewitch, the whole pedophile thing is so not true, she's just really short and skinny, so you get the idea.