coolperson321

Thank you! I know it is not that original, but it was the first thing that inspired me. I read somewhere that when you're younger, you tend to write about ...

I like this poem because it is true. There are some things in life we will just never understand. Is that what the poem was about because that's what I ...

I really enjoyed this! I think you should definitely turn it into a novel. It is definitely something I would read. I won't nitpick because I suck at it, so ...

awesome, awesome! I have read your other poetry too, and you are really good:)

I'm not very good at critiquing poetry, so I won't try. You are amazing at writing though. I really enjoyed this poem. Keep up the good work!!

I didn't see any mistakes, so good job:) Beautifully written, I could imagine everything perfectly. Keep on writing.

Amazing! You will go far for sure. Good job:)

Very good poem! You have talent. I don't really see any mistakes, so good job!

I see the "you can please god" thing. Very well written:) I really enjoyed it!

very, very good. So dramatic:) I am enjoying reading the poetry on this website, and this is one of my favorites:) Good job:)

So, is the narrator homeless. Is the mother dead? That's what I got from it. Am I right? That was really good:) You are talented:)

These lyrics are really good! I've always wished I could write a song, but I just don't have the inspiration. You are very talented, though:)

I really like this poem. I like the way you described everything, it really drew me in. Reading this, I can imagine what is happening, and I can see the ...

awesome! you're a very good writer. keep it up!

Awesome! I love the way you write, it's really captivating:) Keep up the good work