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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Satire Re: Death

    Hi there! Here to review this wonderful poem. Wow. This is very powerful. I couldn't stop reading once I started. I would tell you my favorite line, but then I'd ...

    Jan 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: The acrobat

    Hi there. This is a really nice poem. I liked almost everything about it =) For the dead's lips aren't cold, and their hearts are made of gold There's something ...

    Jan 4, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Ignore

    Hey there! When first reading the prologue, I thought this would be a retelling of Snow White. But I quickly see that it's not and that's fine. It's a nice ...

    Jan 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Potential comes in black and white.

    Hey there, I'm here to review =) I really like this poem! The flow is really nice. The paper is still white, as snow free from impurity, as pure as ...

    Dec 30, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: How Do I Know?

    Hey there =) I'm here to review your poem! First off: love this. It has a nice flow and it's simple. Nice! I'm going to point out any errors/mistakes that ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Dearly Departed

    Hi there! I'm here to review =) *shivers* This is a very dark poem. I expected it to be, when I read the summary, but wow. Truly captivating. You have ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Action / Adventure Re: The USA Abattoir : Chapter Two

    Hey there! =) Here to review! I'll mostly point out errors in grammar, spelling, capitalization - all that stuff! I'm offering suggestions, meaning you don't have to take them if ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Teen Fiction Re: Camp Survivor

    Hey there! I'm here to review =) I really liked this. Especially the last couple of lines. I like how the friends are all sticking together in an environment that's, ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: The Academy - chapter 1 pt. 1

    Hi! I'm here to review =) I thought I was through with vampires until I read this book the other day. Now I'm hooked again, but not as strongly as ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Culture, Literature Re: Darling Day, would you say not?

    Hey! Happy Review Day =) I'm here to review! This is very different from the poems I've been reading so far. It's a good thing! It is! Trees are talking; ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I don't know how to write a poem :/

    Hey! Happy Review Day! I'm here to review =) I love it when I relate to speakers/characters in a poem/story. It makes them more real to me. And that's how ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Anti drug poem

    Hi there! Happy Review Day! I'm here to review =) So I have to start by saying this is a nicely written poem. It has a lot of meaning and, ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Supernatural Re: Mirage

    Hey there! I'm here to review your poem =) I have to say, I really like your writing style. I'd suggest changing the format if you can. Right now it ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Horror Re: Shocked

    Hey! I'm here to review! =) First off, I have to say that I liked your story. I just noticed some problems in punctuation and grammar, but don't worry, I'll ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Narrative Re: Waking Nightmares

    Hi there! Here to review =) After reading this, the first word to come out of my mouth literally was "Wow." I didn't expect this, at all. The summary was ...

    Dec 29, 2013


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