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Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! HI HI HELLO! I'm back and awake and finally reviewing this beautiful beautiful poem ahhhggg I love it so much ...

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WOW oh my goodness I still love this series so much. I love Caden's character - uptight, stick to the plan, really cares about Alex, he's super awesome and well ...

This is a really well done piece. The description of the woman, the desperation Brendon feels to be helped. It does a good job of showing how, when something is ...

This is really pretty, I actually started thinking of a melody while reading it. It feels slow and sorrowful, with gentle envy or resentment. It's ethereal, beautifully written. It's like ...

YAYYYYYYYY chapter two!!! Once again this is done so well, the description of heart pounding along with the desperation to escape. The constant fear of their mother's phone call ending ...

Wow, this is really well done. I love the way it goes from insecurity about appearance to fading gently to love. He sounds like an amazing person, and the way ...

WOW oh my goodness. Just listened to the song and it fits it so well, first of all. Second, the plot twist, oh my god. I really thought it was ...

This is really really good! I love the way "you" is portrayed - so mysterious that I don't know if they're personified or this is a letter to someone. I ...

this is really beautiful. the lyrics with the words, contrasting and mixing to make this amazing poem. I read it over a couple times and genuinely really like it, the ...

Wow... this is so beautiful. The representation of October, the personification and the way it's like a letter you're writing to them. I love this so much, it's amazing. The ...

Beautiful! Short but makes a statement - I love it. "Conquer my love because I don't need me." That line really made me shiver, it's amazingly written. I can imagine ...

I DON'T UNDERSTAND EITHER!! This is written so well ahhhhhhhh. Absolutely agree with everything you're saying too; none of this is fair! The rhyming is done incredibly well too, ESPECIALLY ...

WOW. This is genuinely so amazing; if it was a novel I would absolutely read it. The description of pain, blood - the mystery?? It's so beautiful, in a horrifying ...

Wow....I am feeling some things right now. First off, it's beautiful - the way you speak, almost like a prophet, it adds so much. Secondly, the different ways of description ...