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Hi, I thought I would do the full service of reviwing or part of it anywAY! First of all, I really liked this poem, it had character, feeling and originality ...

Hi Jas, First of all I thought you did a really good poem, illustrating your poem very well and using good iCal and creativity. Review I get too caught up ...

Hi BlueSKIES3! Well first of all, I really liked your poem, I know it is hard to submit when you have just joined and I thought you did an excellent ...

Hi Aubriel! Well first of all, I agree with dogs on quite a few points in the poem, I really enjoyed reading this, and I think a lot of people ...

Hi, Well some parts of this I would like to agree with dogs, But most of it I enjoyed though some bits confusing me. Firstly all, I would like to ...

Hi, First of all, I'm not much of a poem writer or fan, but I really like this one as it was one of the first I have read where ...

Hi, Well first of all, I thought you did a fantastic job for a poem accounting as you are new and I liked it a lot. Although I am not ...

Hi, i He says that cats don't like him because he reminds them of their fathers but the kitten plays fetch with him for hours, jumps on his chest at ...

Hi, First for some nit picking, Jasko Rueben had fallen asleep while researching a magical artifact that a customer had quested for earlier. His head sunk into his desk, many ...

I can’t hear music. The lyrics become skewed. Then they’re about you.   I can’t read. The plots are ours. And they’re yours.   I can’t daydream. My mind is ...

It makes me sick! All this stupid shit bringing fleeting tastes of things I don’t need from dreams I can’t remember. What happens at night in my own head is ...

All this emotion that builds up inside my heart is taking over me. I can't control it, not anymore. I'm going to fall once more, into this pit they call ...

Hi, Well first off I thought you did a truly excellent poem that carries through to the reader effortlessly and I really enjoyed it. It was, as I thought a ...

Hi, I thought you did a great poem that really expresses your feelings in the flowing lines. I totally agree with you on most accounts of this poem and you ...

Wow, we'll done! That was very good! Well first off I would just like to say it was very impressive! I was deeply enjoyed the short piece and and impressed ...