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Hello champ! CM here with a quick comment. I really liked it first of all, wait scrap that, I loved it. It really was excellent and your writing makes me ...

Hello there! CM here to give a quick review. Laughing time the open'ing rhyme (why did you put the apostrophe there? I might be missing something but I don't think ...

Hi, CM here with a review. First I must say that I liked this a lot. Your writing techniques where very good and the story flowed well. I loved the ...

Hi Zephion! CM here. I really liked this poem. I thought that it was a welcome surprise from all the love poems we get on YWS. It offered up a ...

Hi, CM here. Well first I have got to say that I didn't really like this poem. It may have potential but I think the way you wrote it really ...

Hi, CM here with your review. Firstly I would like to say that I thought this poem was absolutely splendid. (There's no way I could write like that) and I ...

Hi, CM here with your review. Firstly, I quite like your style of poetry. The Rhyming was nice, and I felt it flowed very well. But although I liked it ...

Hi Persy, I will review for today. First I was slightly disappointed with this piece compared with your others. I felt that you didn't convey the full amount of emotion ...

Hi, REVIEW I lost myself, In the forest within a sea of trees deeply reinforced. ( I don't think 'reinforced' works well with it) But, I follow a hidden trail ...

Hi, Well first of all, is was an amazing poem, nothing I will say can change that. REVIEW There is something profoundly beautiful about sadness, a longing for a loss, gazing ...

Hi Night Very great, I like your rewriting style, Here are some of my favorite bits; It wasn’t fair. It wasn’t fair that Mary – pious, goody-two-shoes Mary ( I ...

Hi, well first of all, I liked this alot as I am a big fan of horror poetry, and the reviews I have for you, are nothing on your personal ...

Hi there, CM with your review! Anyway, for starters before I get into nitpicking, I would like to say, it was pretty good, there where lots of describing words that ...

Hi, Well I seriously agree with the other reviews in this because I do remember feeling exactly that. I also thought the "..." at the start of each sentence really ...

Hi, Well first of I thought this was an excellent poem that has no need to be long but in its right is amazing. Your great vocab really complimented the ...