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Hey, Alice! clogs here for a Review Day review! I agree with the previous reviewer- it definitely looks a lot cleaner put into lines and stanzas. That being said, there's ...

Hey, writervid! clogs here for a Review Day review! Ok, I'll admit that at first I judged this poem by the title. I thought it would be kind of cliche, ...

Hey, Cowboy! clogs here for a Review Day review! Okay, first order of business: You mean "accept", not "except". "Except" means just about the opposite of "accept", and its misuse ...

Hey, LucyTheBrave! clogs here to review on this fine Review Day! Oooh, I do like this poem. Some suggestions: Maybe try breaking this up into stanzas. I think that every ...

Hey, NoStoryTime! clogs here for a Review Day review! I sit in my room This isn't a very enticing first line. Sitting in my room is what I'm doing right ...

Hey there, Ang190! clogs here for a Review Day review! This poem feels a little unorganized to me right now. Maybe try splitting it up into stanzas. That might make ...

Hey, phangirl! clogs here to review! Ok, the biggest thing that's bothering me about this poem is the italics and bold. I mean, why did you do that? When I'm ...

Hey, Arzoo! clogs here to review! I'll admit that I had to look up the word "apricity". Apparently it means "the warmth of the sun in winter". #themoreyouknow Not that ...

Hey, felistia! clogs here to review! These were some nice poems. Good job. :D You especially made good use of imagery, which I enjoyed. Since the imagery was so strong, ...

Hey Candypickle! clogs here to review! This is such an interesting poem. So many layers. I'm still not quite sure about the meaning of everything, so let's see if I ...

Hey there! clogs here to review! This is kind of weird, because you start off in past tense, but quickly switch to present tense. See, this part remember the cold ...

Hey, keepwriting! clogs here to review! I'm gonna agree with Morrigan on this one. This doesn't really have anything enticing about it. I also saw how you went and basically ...

Hey, Meandbooks! clogs here for a review! I know in your description you said that you know not all activists are like this, but I've been looking at this for ...

Hey, MemoryHunter! cleverclogs here representing Team Batman on this fine Review Day! :D Oooh, this is such a lovely poem you have here. I love the imagery and the comparison ...

Hey, AnnGrace! cleverclogs here representing Team Batman on this fine Review Day! Just a disclaimer here: I've never watched Star Wars in my life, so there might be some things ...