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Hey there, and welcome to YWS! cleverclogs here to review! So this is an interesting prologue. I haven't seen many that are in poetry form. It's a very creative idea, ...

Hi again, Catlover211! cleverclogs here to review! I'm already a crazy cat lady-in-training, so I can definitely relate to this poem. It makes me smile because it reminds me of ...

Hey there, wisegirl22! cleverclogs here to review! (Hey, that rhymes! :P) I live in the South, too. I'm not sure if NC is considered "deep", but I consider it to ...

Hi there, Catlover211! cleverclogs here to review! I totally understand why you wrote this. I'm also guilty of writing unkind things about my teachers in school (funnily enough, it was ...

Hey there, ChocolateCello! cleverclogs here for a quick review! I'm pretty sure that just about everyone can relate to that awful sound that the toaster makes when the toast is ...

Hi there, CandyWizard! cleverclogs here to review your poem! I saw this when it was first posted, and I didn't review it because I was feeling lazy and I figured ...

Hi there, Atsmai! cleverclogs here to review! Spat poison like a snake's tongue What was it that spat the poison? It seems like there should be a "you" at the ...

Hi there, and can I offer a slightly belated welcome to YWS? cleverclogs here to review! Before I can review any actual content of this story, I have to let ...

Hi there, shaon! Welcome to YWS! I'd like to start this review by saying what a cool song this poem would make. Like, seriously, the second-to-last stanza could be the ...

Hello there, and welcome to YWS! cleverclogs here to review! I like how this well this expresses why perfection isn't attainable. It's very true and I like how you phrased ...

Hello there! cleverclogs here for a review! The reason I wanted to leave a review on this poem is because I'm not a fan of Rose Tyler. I know that ...

Hello there! cleverclogs here for a Review Day review! First of all, this isn't really a short story. It's not really anything in particular. In fact, it's exactly what the ...

Hello there! cleverclogs here for a... Review Day review! Now, the one glaring mistake that I have a lasting impression of is the two enormous paragraphs. Frankly, they're an eyesore ...

Hello there! cleverclogs here for a... Review Day review! This poem is awesome. There's not anything that I found wrong with it that needs to be fixed, so I'll give ...

Hello there! cleverclogs here to drop a... Review Day review! The first thing I'll say is that whenever you write a character's thoughts, then they should be italicized and not ...