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Re: thanks for hurting me, i guess
Hi, clogs here for a review! First of all, I think that this is something that everyone can relate to at some point in their life. It's relatable for a ...
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Re: Observations
Hi! clogs here for my first review in 5 years, so I hope I can say something helpful. I enjoyed how your poem took me through the different seasons. You ...
Jun 9, 2023 -
Re: My 2 Sentence Horror Stories
Hey, clogs here for a review! my first in way too long So I'm picking up a pattern from these things: The first sentence usually sets up a fairly normal ...
Mar 7, 2017 -
Re: Miss Adeline Rosabelle
Hey there! clogs here to review! In regards to formatting poetry, this article goes through a couple of methods: Now, onto the actual review: Like the previous reviewer, I felt ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: Drowning
Hey there! clogs here to review! It's been a while since I've reviewed, so I apologize in advance if I'm rusty. That being said, I'll just jump right in: Though ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: Shut Them Blinds Boy
Hey there! clogs here to review! I really like the evocative imagery in this. You have a good grasp on the symbolism in the window, which makes for a nice ...
Dec 5, 2016 -
Re: I Am Afraid
Yo. clogs here to review. I'm going to save my personal thoughts about this for the end, and just review the poem itself for now. So, moving right along: First, ...
Oct 31, 2016 -
Re: Nothing to wear
Hey there! clogs here to review! I'm just gonna jump right in and say that I think the humor in this poem would be brought out a lot more if ...
Oct 23, 2016 -
Re: Thoughts to a Friend
'Ello there! I realize you don't want reviews on this, but when you publish a work, it's inevitably going to be reviewed. You can try posting it on your wall ...
Oct 19, 2016 -
Re: Our Hearts are Leaves
Hey, clogs here to review. I'm a huge sucker for fall-related imagery, and I thought the metaphor between leaves and hearts was definitely an interesting one to make. However, I ...
Oct 16, 2016 -
Re: My Love
Hey there! clogs here for a review day review! I'll admit that I didn't see that last line coming, haha. Is this about Dean Winchester? Bad supernatural jokes aside, let's ...
Sep 25, 2016 -
Re: Family Memories, Dead Wasps and Swimming Pools
Hey, clogs here for a quick review! You mentioned that you weren't entirely sure what this is. From my perspective, it looks like a poem, but doesn't quite have the ...
Sep 25, 2016 -
Re: A Word or Two to my Love
Hey there! clogs here to review! even though I should probably be doing homework I'm going to go ahead and second the sentiments of the previous review. This is a ...
Sep 18, 2016 -
Re: Balance
Yo, clogs here to review! I've reviewed some of your works before, so you probably have some idea of what's coming: Imagery. This poem is bare-bones to the point that ...
Sep 18, 2016 -
Re: falling and fallen
Hey there! clogs here to review! Before anything else, I'd like to comment on the use of centered text. While that's lovely for Hallmark cards, I'm of the opinion that ...
Sep 9, 2016
