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  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: thanks for hurting me, i guess

    Hi, clogs here for a review! First of all, I think that this is something that everyone can relate to at some point in their life. It's relatable for a ...

    Jun 9, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Observations

    Hi! clogs here for my first review in 5 years, so I hope I can say something helpful. I enjoyed how your poem took me through the different seasons. You ...

    Jun 9, 2023
  • Other » Horror, Dramatic Re: My 2 Sentence Horror Stories

    Hey, clogs here for a review! my first in way too long So I'm picking up a pattern from these things: The first sentence usually sets up a fairly normal ...

    Mar 7, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Miss Adeline Rosabelle

    Hey there! clogs here to review! In regards to formatting poetry, this article goes through a couple of methods: Now, onto the actual review: Like the previous reviewer, I felt ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Drowning

    Hey there! clogs here to review! It's been a while since I've reviewed, so I apologize in advance if I'm rusty. That being said, I'll just jump right in: Though ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: Shut Them Blinds Boy

    Hey there! clogs here to review! I really like the evocative imagery in this. You have a good grasp on the symbolism in the window, which makes for a nice ...

    Dec 5, 2016
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: I Am Afraid

    Yo. clogs here to review. I'm going to save my personal thoughts about this for the end, and just review the poem itself for now. So, moving right along: First, ...

    Oct 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Humor, Culture Re: Nothing to wear

    Hey there! clogs here to review! I'm just gonna jump right in and say that I think the humor in this poem would be brought out a lot more if ...

    Oct 23, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Thoughts to a Friend

    'Ello there! I realize you don't want reviews on this, but when you publish a work, it's inevitably going to be reviewed. You can try posting it on your wall ...

    Oct 19, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: Our Hearts are Leaves

    Hey, clogs here to review. I'm a huge sucker for fall-related imagery, and I thought the metaphor between leaves and hearts was definitely an interesting one to make. However, I ...

    Oct 16, 2016
  • Poetry » Humor, Romantic Re: My Love

    Hey there! clogs here for a review day review! I'll admit that I didn't see that last line coming, haha. Is this about Dean Winchester? Bad supernatural jokes aside, let's ...

    Sep 25, 2016
  • Other » General, General Re: Family Memories, Dead Wasps and Swimming Pools

    Hey, clogs here for a quick review! You mentioned that you weren't entirely sure what this is. From my perspective, it looks like a poem, but doesn't quite have the ...

    Sep 25, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: A Word or Two to my Love

    Hey there! clogs here to review! even though I should probably be doing homework I'm going to go ahead and second the sentiments of the previous review. This is a ...

    Sep 18, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Balance

    Yo, clogs here to review! I've reviewed some of your works before, so you probably have some idea of what's coming: Imagery. This poem is bare-bones to the point that ...

    Sep 18, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: falling and fallen

    Hey there! clogs here to review! Before anything else, I'd like to comment on the use of centered text. While that's lovely for Hallmark cards, I'm of the opinion that ...

    Sep 9, 2016


Cheat your landlord if you can and must, but do not try to shortchange the Muse. It cannot be done. You can’t fake quality any more than you can fake a good meal.
— William S. Burroughs