chancesnchanges

It sounds like a part of it is spritual while the other is to the person you love.. Without him you can't construct, think and write on a paper. But ...

Hi! Stripelife1.. For me, we must rejoice and accept Lord Jesus Christ to be our Saviour and we must let God enter our heart and mind. As it is said, ...

This piece is like your own interpretation of the "Rising of the Lord" from the dead after three days.. The world is a chaos back then.. Many do not believe ...

Hi! Stephii412.. The idea of putting a 'hidden code' in your piece is unique. The sentences formed by those words is like the synopsis of poem. It is cute.. And ...

This content of the poem is sweet. Especially, on the last two lines -- waiting for the person you love, no matter what it takes. On the first stanza, you ...

Hi! LemonyIce.. Your piece delivered a feeling of a person who is liking or loving someone, secretly. You have a cute description that makes us relate to it. Especially, when ...

This sounds like that he/she is possessive of his/her partner but quite cute, as well. Someone that makes someone smile after reading. Though, I know that we have different interpretation ...

"Once Upon A Dream?"; the title sounds interesting so I've read it.. Whoa, I had goosebumps after reading. Really.. How could Lance be just a dream but you have a ...

Puppy Love? But who knows if it's for a lifetime. The story was cute and bubbly. You started with introducing the popular guy in your school who happens to be ...

Aww.. The story is portraying how difficult it is to confess to your long time friend. A friend that you consider special in every way. This idea, made me teary ...

Hi! klara1882.. In the italized paragraph, I like the message enclosed in it. Your perspective on -- why you and most of us write. On the next three paragraphs, the ...

Hi! probablynot.. Through your description, I was able to picture the setting and your characters. Their movements and feelings. Their emotions, especially on the lady's part.. the pain she felt, ...

Hi! karribou.. You made a cute way of describing a book. It's contents, message and what it gives you. How it helps in your everyday life and how it unfolds ...

Your piece was short but meaningful at the same time. Your 'paired-sentences' go along together. But in the third stanza, I think you must understand yourself to "stand by what ...

What a nice piece. The flow was continuous, it didn't sound choppy while reading it. You have a nice description and perspective in life. You described the surrounding pretty well ...