Young Writers Society

Hi! there Aravis10 :) .. An arrange marriage is what happened, I suppose. Which you have described in detail that I was able to imagine the characters, event and setting. ...

Hi! there ladcat13 :) .. Wow, this is very well-written. I find Mirayah and Limok's dinner cute and light— a happy one, I must say. Then, their dream actually startled ...

Hi! there paula08 :) .. With this poem you have voiced out the concealed emotions of those who lie and sugarcoat their true feelings to make the persons they love ...

Hi! I'm here again to review :) .. I was enjoying while reading this and then suddenly What?!, I scrolled down then it showed the comment box already. Guess, will ...

Hi! there Laure :) .. I liked how you've written and described your characters, especially, refreshing and informing us about their capabilities-- like Sirce is more knowledgeable in reading than ...

Hi! there Nargles :) .. I really like it as much as the others did. Aside from your choice of words that surely worked it's magic, it is your description ...

Hi! there Pokemonlover545 :) .. This reminded me of the times when I used to watch and play Pokemon. You had captured the fun in taking part in their world. ...

Hi! there shivam :) .. That being said on your author's note, I won't go in detail. So, generally, this is not the usual girl likes boy or boy likes ...

Hi! there TaciturnPhantom :) .. *applauds* You made use of such strong and compelling words to express your deepest thoughts about a certain matter. I really like it as well ...

Hi! there fallenoutofgrace :) .. I really find this sweet like when you sing it for the lady that you admire, she'll surely like it if not love it. Either ...

Hi! there WindSailor :) .. This almost made me cry. It really is, heartwarming. You expressed your innermost thoughts in a very affecting way. I, so like this :) . ...

Hi! there Nai-xi :) .. This is something new to me and, at the same, thrilling. I like that you have written in an omniscient point of view but giving ...

Hi! there Deanie :) .. Whoa, this certainly lightens up someone's mood. I've clicked this open not knowing what to expect but after finishing my lips curved upwards. I just ...

Hi! there SecreteJournalist :) .. Yeah, I did find it a bit strange but towards the end my thoughts had been clarified. I must say, that your punctuations were well-placed; ...

Hi! there RachelLeeAnn :) The words—in every line of each stanza, flow in coordination that your emotions affect your readers. We, as well, feel your hurt and your want to ...