carmenbluestar

Great poem! It's short and sweet and easy t connect with. I love the ending, for just a few words it was pretty emotional and serious which is what gave ...

Awesome this was great, your imagery and imagination plus the format are all superb. Everything fits together so well (time to celebrate!). I have no corrections for you the word ...

Funny and dare I say cute. There something just genius with poems that can be short and so entertaining. Good on you to provide this entertainment and hey I'm all ...

I agree whole heartedly with your previous comment the orientation you have chosen though unique is is confusing and a bit distracting which is too bad since your poem is ...

From what I can see you have a great talent for description and it makes your story so very grand. The flow is quite good for the most part though ...

Great descriptions, readers are sure to get caught up in the scenery and scenarios. But I have to agree though you have some awesome writing skills there is a general ...

I see what you mean by that ending it was awesome and kind of fun. When I first looked at your poem I thought "wow this is a long one" ...

This is such a sweet poem and it makes me smile. There's so much emotion and that really shows that you have talent. For the most part the entire thing ...

Cool piece, I really like the style you chose since it gives some different perspectives and therefor a different way of seeing the same thing. The ending was so sad, ...

Captivated by the first sentence! You have a talent for imagery and everything seems well thought out and planned. It's an interesting story that would be neat to read more ...

I like this work its pretty cool. The descriptions you have are vivid and imaginative, the characters are also quite well thought out. The only problem I really had (and ...

Ahh this is awesome! I'm so happy I read it even though the title made me think that it would be some big rant. Thank you for surprising me :) ...

This is a very short poem for a very large "subject" the night sky has a lot of potential yet your wording and structure is still very strong and the ...

I could just imagine this poem with some dramatic yet sad and slow song playing in the background. It just gave me so many 'feels' :P I love it, I ...

This is a great poem that many can connect to, especially because of how in depth it seems to go. You have a interesting structure and great wording which makes ...