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  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: Carlos

    Hai :3 Oh, this is chilling!! I love how compact it is, because the shortness makes the horror feel immediate and inescapable. There’s no long explanation, no slow setup, just ...

    Jun 9
  • Poetry » Politics, Realistic Re: See beyond

    Hai :3 I really like the intention behind this!! There’s such a clear emotional drive here, and I love that the poem doesn’t settle for “one side has it worse.” ...

    Jun 7
  • Poetry » General, General Re: fawn

    Hai cherie :3 I'm here for that review!! A bit belated, sorry!! Hmm, what I really love is that the fawn imagery never feels passive. It’s not just “poor innocent ...

    Jun 3
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Supernatural Re: Lucille Lysander’s origin

    Haiiii :3 I think this is the last review I'll be able to get in this Review Day >.< First of all, I really like how singing is both beautiful ...

    May 30
  • Short Story » Romantic, Supernatural Re: Henry's story-The adventures of Poppy McLain

    Hai... again... hehe!! Wow, this is soooo painful and tense!! I love how the scene is physically quiet, just Henry in a white padded room, Ash entering, but emotionally it ...

    May 30
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Teen Fiction Re: Fidget spinners and conversation winners

    Hai again :3 Yay, more romance!! I love how small the scene is on the surface, but Kyle’s inner world makes it feel huge!! The way he listens to Ben ...

    May 30
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: Piercing the Veil CHP 2 {Sanders Sides Fanfiction}

    Hai :3 This is such a fun chapter!! I love how it starts with something very mundane and stressful, like getting out of a confusing hospital parking structure, and slowly ...

    May 30
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Science Fiction Re: Heaven's Falling Down [Ch. XVI, Nine]

    Hai :3 I'm jumping into this a little blind, but I tried to skim the previous chapters!! My first reaction was that this feels like being thrown into the deep ...

    May 30
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Supernatural Re: Addison’s origin

    Hai :3 Oooh, another one!! I really like how Addison’s romantic longing gets twisted into something monstrous here. The opening sets her up as someone who wants love so badly ...

    May 30
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Desmaire Parrish’s origin

    Hai again :3 Ooh, I love how this starts with Desmaire being sweet and welcoming, only for that kindness to become the very thing that leads her into danger... Really ...

    May 30
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Science Fiction Re: Syboleth ch. 23: Bang Bang Bang Bang

    Hai :3 Even without context, I really like how Keira’s exhaustion and alienation come through immediately. The party feels loud and artificial, but she’s so internal and guarded that everything ...

    May 30
  • Short Story » General, Other Re: Absinthe’s doll shopping

    Hai :3 Love the eerie undertone to this!! I like how the Christmas Eve/birthday setting gives everything this warm, storybook glow, while the doll shop itself feels quietly unsettling. The ...

    May 30
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: Careful with the dead body

    Hai :3 It's me, again!! Hm. This is very compact and creepy!! I like how quickly it drops us into the grotesque without overexplaining what happened. The imagery is really ...

    May 30
  • Art » Satire, Realistic Re: H I

    Hai :3 This is SUCH a funny concept!! I love how it takes the whole AI panic/AI hype cycle and turns it into this absurd infomercial for literally just being ...

    May 30
  • Poetry » General, General Re: box-woman

    Hai :3 Yayyy, poetry!! I thought that there’s such a claustrophobic ache to this poem, like everything is being packed away, sealed, buried, kept in some kind of emotional storage ...

    May 30


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