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Re: Faking Perfect
AWHHHHHH! So cute and yet sad. I really liked it because it could happen. It is filled with feelings. An emotion that pierces everyone's heart. Its a feeling that one ...
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Re: I Could Not Save You
AWESOME! I really liked this because fame can really go to someone's head and they forget who they really are. This has happened to me and it can be depressing. ...
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Re: Footprints
Amazing! Just Amazing! Such descriptive words! I really liked 'Everyone returns to the sea' So True! Like they say. There are plenty of fish in the sea. I liked this ...
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Re: Mischance
GREAT! Not very many people can write in the perspective of a murderer! It is how I imagine someone who is guilty of murder and hates themselves for it. You ...
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Re: God took you from me
Awhhhh. Its just so sad :( I am sorry for your loss. But you do have a talent. Its wonderful poetry when you let all your emotion into it. Losing ...
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Re: Going Home
I like this. It feels like I am the person and I know him completely. And yet he didn't speak a single word during the story. Its just thoughts. It ...
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Re: The Way..
Very Beautiful. Couldn't write better myself! Hope you keep writing poetry. Personally I really like your work. Your a great poet. Really I'm not the best poet. But you have ...
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Re: Stubborn
I Love it! I can relate to this! It is a piece that speaks the real truth. Truth . . . Such a mysterious word. You never really know if ...
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Re: What is love?
Beautiful! I loved that it's just so... so... I don't know! I can't put it into words! Your an awesome poet! I would love to here more of your poetry! ...
Sep 7, 2013 -
Re: The House
Loved it!!!! I Loved it! I Loved it! I Loved it! Great writing! I felt like I was really there! you should write more!!! I think you should also correct ...
Sep 7, 2013 -
Re: What Makes You Feel Orange
Loved this one! You are a great writer! One question. . . Is it a true story? You are a good writer I certainly couldn't write this good. But you ...
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Re: Memories
EPIC! I loved this. I felt sadness. I felt happiness. I felt love. By just reading this short story. I know your going to be an awesome writer. No you ...
Sep 7, 2013 -
Re: you hurt me :(
I love this poem! It's so true! You are a good poet and should write more. I didn't see any grammar mistakes! No one deserves what happened in the poem. ...
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Re: Little Chimney
It is a depressing story and yet one of the best writing I have ever read. You have a talent. I felt the emotion and I was touched. I really ...
Sep 7, 2013 -
Re: Heather
I Loved your story and hope you will write another. You are an incredible author and I think you should keep writing. you have a talent I just have a ...
Sep 7, 2013
