brookeallo

Wow, I love your writing style it has a really good flow and you can tell that you aren't trying to make every line rhyme which I think makes it ...

This poem has a more emotional feeling that you can tell is based on experience which adds emphasize and makes it easier for the reader to be able to connect ...

I find this to be a very concrete and intricate poem. It's very well written and flows together in a way that brings out a certain feeling while reading it. ...

This is so good by far my favorite poem I have read on here. I loved every part of it and there is honestly nothing I could say for you ...

I loved this poem. It's one of the first on here that has a good flow and not a lot of mistakes. The format in which it is presented is ...

The begining of the poem was great especially starting with a simile, but it definently was a little tough going into the second line. Even though the flow was there ...

I really like this poem and the way the lines flow together. I feel alone a lot and the poem captures the emotion of being on one's own. If I ...

For someones first poem this is really good but I wish I could have connected more to it. I feel like the job of a poem is to get the ...

I liked reading this one a lot. It is very different and it seems that your trying to ask a question but I feel like the meaning of the poem ...