Hi @shipra10 I am here to do a reel quick review, so I just remmembered that you asked me to give you some ad vise on this so here I am.
Thoughts about the poem
so I think that your did really, really well for your first poem, this was lovely to read, and to be one'st i don't really think there is much to improve on, also I agree with @FlamingPhoeinx about your name, it sounds wonderful, I don't really have much to say other then I think you did a grate and spun take you leer job. I also agree with @brookeallo of what they said as well, so yes I think those two reviews covered everything that needs to be done. this was a great poem to read, and I think you should write more like it.
what were my favorite lines of the poem
this line feels really true and reel I just feel like this one stuck out to me because, sometimes it can be hard to introduce yourself. so really this was a great start to the poemIt's hard to introduce myself
So that is all that I can really say about it. So keep up the great poem writing you are great at it. Never stop writing, and don't let someone tell you what to do when it comes to writing make your on choices and make them wisely.
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