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brookeallo

  • Poetry » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Behind The Window

    Wow when i read this i imagined this would be in like one of those books from like the 1800s that use that certain type of language and like monologues. ...

    Jun 19, 2021
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: a series of unfortunate events.

    I loved the poem I like reading poems that have a different scheme/rhythm and this one definently did. I think maybe the punctuation might be a little off. By using ...

    Jun 19, 2021
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General Re: go home

    Wow! I really enjoyed this I especially liked that you made an audio with it that was really cool and the instrumental and singing is really good. It gives off ...

    May 16, 2020
  • Poetry » Literature, Dramatic Re: bloodlust

    From the first stanza I was like I completely understand the feeling. Writing is something that i use to clear my mind too. The poem describes what its like to ...

    May 16, 2020
  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: Depression Session

    Creativity and uniqueness is so important in poetry and I really enjoyed how it modeled like Dr. Seuus work. It did what Dr. Seuss and others do by adding pep/ ...

    May 16, 2020
  • Poetry » Culture, Health Re: ED Culture

    Hi, I have to say I really loved this poem and as someone who has suffered with eating disorders before, this really hits deep. I really liked the word choices. ...

    May 16, 2020
  • Poetry » Politics, Culture Re: This Is Our Fight

    I really enjoyed the poem. As a female I can relate and understand all the feelings here. I really liked the first stanza the flow was really good. I do ...

    May 13, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: excuses, excuses

    I really enjoyed this. It had a very unique meaning to it. There's lots of details and the questions really help the flow. The imagery is awesome. The use of ...

    May 13, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: The Mask We All Wear

    I really really enjoyed this poem. There's a lot of different and unique writing styles, such as using the dashes and I enjoy the questions used. It also has a ...

    May 13, 2020
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Film Re: Second star to the right

    I loved how you incorporated Peter pan and the second star to the right into the poem. The poem itself is very deep and meaningful showing growing up on these ...

    Apr 29, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Collection

    I love how short but deep these poems are. Each has a lesson and meaning to it. There's good imagery and some metaphors. I especially love the 5th one, its ...

    Apr 29, 2020
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: the purple man(re-edited)

    This is amazing. As soon as I started reading I could just feel everything. The way this was written is absolutely amazing. It's full of images, morals and metaphors. It ...

    Apr 29, 2020
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Lyrical Re: Blood of wolf

    Hi, I am gonna hive a quick review. First off, I really enjoyed this poem. There's a unique way of writing and it's really descriptive. There is lots of energy. ...

    Apr 29, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Seals of Love

    I really liked this poem. I will say that you have a really unique way of writing some poems kinda all seem to follow the same rules/ structure and this ...

    Mar 14, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Cheers

    I really loved this poem. It was so well written and I liked how love and hate and all where described. There was very powerful word choice such as precariousness ...

    Jan 6, 2020


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