Lovely gorgeous and beautiful. The poem is an expression of strong admiration for the physical beauty of someone. WE are told this from the outset and it is repeated throughout. As a reader I can appreciate strong admiration, however I can't see the person spoken about because no visual imagery is used. Is it a female or male?
Perfection is a subjective evaluation since it varies from person to person and culture to culture. Women wearing lip plates are considered perfect sometimes. Certain tribes in Mexico considered cockeyed women exotic. So tastes vary, and what one person views as beautiful another might consider grotesque. Some people consider headhunters brilliant.
A detailed description or brief reference to what it is that the speaker considers beautiful would serve to clarify. It can include such things as the eyes, the lips, the skin, the hair, the curvature of thighs and buttocks, the silkiness of skin, the melodious sound of a voice etcetera. Otherwise the reader is left wondering what indeed it might be is that the writer is praising as beatiful.
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I think you meant "infused" not "fused".
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