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Re: The end is near
Really good, I could feel the anger and violence as if it was my own.
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: My Superman
It wasn't bad, bittersweet. I couldn't but feel as if I were talking about MY Superman.
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: The Monster That Is Mine
Good, really good, I got confused a little though...
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: Lost.
I really like this, the emotion was easy to read, and I felt despair, as if I were you.
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: Anger Splatters
I love it, and I told you that you were good, this helps prove it.
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: A reason, A season
I agree with TheTruthLiesWithin.
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: I'm So Full Of It
I really liked this poem, the flow was good. Really good.
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: Kiss me when I'm sober
I absolutely love it, good job! Make some more, please.
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: Ramblings of a dead heart.
Good, but needs more figurative language, but still good without.
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: Promise
It's beautiful, and reminds me of when I was young and innocent.
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: invisible to you. :-(
It's really good and sad, it reminded me of my ex boyfriend. I really liked it.
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: White Ravens
That was awesome! I loved it. It was sad, and reminded me of the past. Maybe that's why it's so good, because it hit something inside of me too and ...
Jan 25, 2011 -
Re: Darkness pops my Bubble
That was really good. How long have you been writing? If your like me it'd be around 7 years, you should really publish them.
Jan 25, 2011
