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Re: The end is near
Really good, I could feel the anger and violence as if it was my own.
Wed Jan 26, 2011 5:44 pm -
Re: My Superman
It wasn't bad, bittersweet. I couldn't but feel as if I were talking about MY Superman.
Wed Jan 26, 2011 5:43 pm -
Re: The Monster That Is Mine
Good, really good, I got confused a little though...
Wed Jan 26, 2011 5:40 pm -
Re: Lost.
I really like this, the emotion was easy to read, and I felt despair, as if I were you.
Wed Jan 26, 2011 5:35 pm -
Re: Anger Splatters
I love it, and I told you that you were good, this helps prove it.
Wed Jan 26, 2011 5:33 pm -
Re: A reason, A season
I agree with TheTruthLiesWithin.
Wed Jan 26, 2011 5:31 pm -
Re: I'm So Full Of It
I really liked this poem, the flow was good. Really good.
Wed Jan 26, 2011 5:29 pm -
Re: Kiss me when I'm sober
I absolutely love it, good job! Make some more, please.
Wed Jan 26, 2011 5:28 pm -
Re: Ramblings of a dead heart.
Good, but needs more figurative language, but still good without.
Wed Jan 26, 2011 5:18 pm -
Re: Promise
It's beautiful, and reminds me of when I was young and innocent.
Wed Jan 26, 2011 4:51 pm -
Re: invisible to you. :-(
It's really good and sad, it reminded me of my ex boyfriend. I really liked it.
Wed Jan 26, 2011 4:49 pm -
Re: White Ravens
That was awesome! I loved it. It was sad, and reminded me of the past. Maybe that's why it's so good, because it hit something inside of me too and ...
Tue Jan 25, 2011 8:59 pm -
Re: Darkness pops my Bubble
That was really good. How long have you been writing? If your like me it'd be around 7 years, you should really publish them.
Tue Jan 25, 2011 8:55 pm