brokeninpieces

I really loved this poem, especially since I feel the same way, today in this world, people are so hyprocritical, but really, it was an awesome poem. This will definetly ...

This is really good, very deep. I really like it, this is something I wouldn't definetly rate a high score for. Good job, dude, (I call everyone dude, so please ...

I liked it a lot, but there's really no flow. If people have said this already sorry, I haven't read the comments yet. But the imagery is awesome, and your ...

It was meant to be a twist or Rome and Juliet, but thank you. What I was trying to say was the Juliet had found her Romeo dead, they had ...

Amazing, really truly amazing. You sound like you've been writing forever. You sound like a professional on this. I'm actually speechless, but really that was awesome, I loved it.

I agree with cupcake. It is good and the ending shocked me. I like it, and I've gone through the same thing so this poem relates to my past which ...

Haha, funny, but got to admit it that it does sound like a vent. Try again with the venting and you could find something that feels right and maybe if ...

It's not my usual kind of poem, but I do like it. It reminds me of Loretta Lynn. Was she your inspiration? If not, listen to her song, it's a ...

Really good, but I agree it needs some work, but it is good. Keep working on it and it could be another classic.

Awesome, really awesome. Doesn't need really any work, you should publish. I really am amazed how good some of these people are on here, and you're definetly one of them.

Not bad, but why so many big words? Some people (like me) don't understand a couple of those. But it is good and sad. Just add some more figurative language, ...

Really good, emotional, and gets to the reader. Though, I agree with some that the last part needs some work. But it is good.

Haha, I love it. Attitude in a poem, nice. And so true for so many people, ccould use some work though, but good so far.

Awesome! It's like my Chucky, haha.

It reminded me of Edgar Allen Poe's 'Alone'.