We Are Alone-Edit #1!

It'd good, it has good visuals and good flow and really nice meaning could really relate to it and i find those are the best ( sorry for sounding redundant to my counterparts above me. Keep writing!

Really good, but I agree it needs some work, but it is good. Keep working on it and it could be another classic.

i can relate to this poem and those are the best. I thought you really reached out to your aduience well. I thought your flow was good. I also really liked your word choices they touched me in a certin way. You did a great job. Keep up the writing and the good work.

Thanks so much Kafkaescence! I always love your reviews! I'll be sure to edit this--I normally don't just throw something down, but it came to me, and I said what the heck!

This is great, Bookworm! Though I'll admit that I do agree with you on that it is a rough draft.

When I was young
I felt isolated
Because I understood
Why the plants go away "Go away" is not the most original of phrases.
In winter
And come back again Same thing with "come back."
When the world weeps

My mother
Never reads the paper
Her life is “busy enough’ This line really disrupts the flow.
The headlines
Are too cruel "Cruel" makes me think that the headlines are directly, and negatively, addressing the reader, in this case your mother. I would use a different word here.
For her to carry

Sometimes in the summer
A wasp
Catches in my window
She understands
This is her fate
And waits for the cold

We are all blinded
By our own internal machine "All" suggests plural, whereas "own" suggests singular. They are conflicting. I would just get rid of "own."
Our path is singular
Not enough room You need a smoother transition between this and the above line.
For regrets
We are alone