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Re: Delete
WOW!!! I had no idea what you were talking about half the time, but I was really and truly moved. Your use of words are enough to bring out tears ...
Jan 31, 2013 -
Re: Don't Leave Me
hahaha...... wow, this poem got some at- tit- uuude!! ( mmmmmhmmmm ) :) Amazing! I loved how it was so to the point, so direct, so concise..... It was really ...
Jan 31, 2013 -
Re: The ache of a wasted life is more than I can bear
Wow! Beautiful! Amazing! This is one of the few poems that flows smoothly and glides through my mind. I would love to chirp you one shot and give you the ...
Jan 31, 2013 -
Re: If I'd Only Known
Hey there.. This poem was raw and emotional, and that is something that I appreciate in a writer's work. I think that you put alot of you in there and ...
Jan 24, 2013 -
Re: When The Light Burns
That was intense, but the good kind. I love this type of poetry, the kind that forces you in and makes you stay submerged. I sensed a resolved desperation in ...
Dec 4, 2012 -
Re: Green Love, Green Pencils
hahaha, amazing!! Wow, this piece speaks of the optimistic, endearing side of love, as opposed to the dramatic more pessimistic side. I loved it. The flow was a bit out ...
Dec 4, 2012 -
Re: Battlefield in Paradise
Amazing, truly amazing. I usually dont enjoy reading lyrics but I have to say that this particular piece has a flow that grips you from the beginning. I loved the ...
Dec 4, 2012 -
Re: Dear Lorraine
Wow, wow, wow, wow,wow!! I seriously loved that! Even got a little teary-eyed ( don't really know if that was what you intended ) This piece was....rolling, austere, apologetic, defensive,loving, ...
Dec 4, 2012 -
Re: Don't Give up on Me
A simple yet potent piece. I found it to have a unique structure, something that you have to get used to but can just as easily glide over without the ...
Dec 4, 2012 -
Re: Sometimes when I miss you
Wow, a really really emotional piece of writing. I can see that you submerged inside yourself to gather the raw emotion. A few grammatical errors here and there, but you ...
Dec 4, 2012 -
Re: To Laura (The Last Letter)
Wow. Tears welled up. What an amazing piece of writing that flows with all the sweetness of the purest love.A tragic letter that ends with an everlasting token.Congratulations.
Oct 25, 2012 - Re: The Moment We Love Best Oct 3, 2012
