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Re: Jeff's Diary: The Book of Shadows
Oh dang! Why would I write It's Friday night when it's already in the headlining? How stupid of me. Thanks, Noelle ;)
Apr 28, 2013 -
Re: 1
Dude, you are reviewing nothing...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: Dawn of the Harlem Shake Zombies
Love it!
Mar 27, 2013 -
Re: Jeff's Diary: Prepare to go Psychlo
Hmm, I feel you spent way too much time on the 1st entry here. Yes, Lord is supposed to be in caps, I found it weird too, but I researched ...
Mar 13, 2013 -
Re: The Pirates of Botany Bay
Not too big on poems, but this was really great. Great writing Rydia ;)
Feb 28, 2013 -
Re: Jeff's Diary: Ode to Captain Butthurt
Alright, hey Nether. This is not at all an insult to Christianity, I would have you do some research on satire before critiquing on such, but alas, that's out of ...
Feb 27, 2013 -
Re: Jeff's Diary: Ode to Captain Butthurt
I actually mentioned the girl in an earlier entry. Thanks again ;)
Feb 27, 2013 -
Re: DERP
This is perhaps the most complete and relevant epitome of modern writing. Good job? Taking initiative, breaking down the walls and creating food for thought... So, to summarize: No.
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: Jeff's Diary: Unholy War
Greetings again! If whoever checked out my previous entry decides to give this a go i just want to add that random is key word here. You wouldn’t expect Jesus ...
Feb 16, 2013 -
Re: Jeff's Diary
Pretty weird stuff. During one of the many nights I struggle to sleep, I for some reason got this idea into my mind. I wrote down so many funny scenarios ...
Feb 13, 2013 -
Re: The Wheel Spins Again
Thanks for the pointers mate. This was one of the first things i ever wrote and i rushed it for a contest. Overall it's a big mess. If i had ...
Feb 3, 2013 -
Re: Yank
Hey Jon! As with Charlie II above me, i was drawn towards the comedy aspect of your story. But - and i guess this is my main criticism - i ...
Jan 30, 2013 -
Re: Once Upon a Sundae
I loved this ending ;)
Jan 28, 2013
