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Wow! This story is amazing, its fantastic, its phenomenal! It seems to be everything at once and nothing at the exact same time. It has all the glory of a blank page just waiting to be filled up with the penned creations sprung straight from a writers mind. It is the oblivion that has faced man since the dawn of time as well as the effervescent light that tantalizes everyones dream. It is the warmth in a puppy dog's eyes and the contented purr of a kitten beside a fire. It is the question we all want answered and it is the answer we most fear. It is what has spanned through centuries and been born but yesterday. It is that fiery pain that lances through ones body and it is that tranquil feeling that lulls as to sleep. It is the dark and twisted personality of the gnarliest man, and the gentle intentions of a baby. It is the caress of a lover who has spurned you. The hate in your stomach when you see that face knowing, knowing that he will never be yours. Those blue eyes that are full of such arrogance and condescension. It is that feeling that wants to wipe him from the face of the earth, yet at the same time save him and teach him to be good again. To show him the ways of the world, while in the process opening a little bit of yourself to him. It is hearing him smile and watching him laugh and the self knowing that it is you there that makes him do it. It is feeling the tenderness of his touch and returning it with an equal passion. It is the gut-wrenching news to find out that you did not fix him. That he is gone with someone else. That it starts all over again, the pain, the confusion, the denial of all that has ever existed. The Hate, and the rage and then the crushing despair that you don't know if you will ever get out of. You surface briefly only to get dragged back under. It is a viscous cycle. One that must never be repeated so you do the only thing that any sane person would do. You do nothing. Nothing just as this page dictates. Nothing, but blank space, ready to fill with one's own story. Ready, just waiting for you to make the first move.
Dude, you are reviewing nothing...
Where is it? This is the second time this has happened to me today. Hmmmm......