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  • Other » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: Star Wars Fan-Fic

    Hello there, young padawan! Alright, time for some fanfiction. Not too often I'll indulge in that, but for Star Wars, there's little I wouldn't do. In fact, reading through this, ...

    Jul 23, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Vampirisi; Chapter Four

    Hey Cesare! Back to review the fourth chapter of your second book. I apologize for taking such time to get around to this. You do write this series at quite ...

    Jul 14, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Fantasy Re: The Chains of Duty Chapter 5 The Calm Before The Storm

    Hey Confused! You've already written another chapter to this series, and I'm back to check out your fifth chapter. Though, despite you thinking of this as a draft, it is ...

    Jul 13, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Snow: The Tale of A Cold Heart (Part IX)

    Hey Silver! You've published another chapter! That is awesome! I'm sorry for not getting around to it sooner and being roughly a week late for this. I find my time ...

    Jul 9, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Mr. Right

    Hey Holly! This was quite the fun little read. It had an absurd kind of plot and weirdness that sort of spoke to me. I quite enjoy works like this. ...

    Jul 9, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Vampirisi; Chapter Three

    Hey Cesare! You have decided to break your absence and return to YWS sooner than you originally planned. You've even published a new chapter you've been working on. That's awesome. ...

    Jul 7, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Fantasy Re: Fallen Angel

    Hey Armydah! I should start off with a belated welcome to YWS, I hope you enjoy yourself here. ;) Well, in short, I thought this was an interesting read. The ...

    Jul 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter 1:The Apocalypse

    Hey there, UnicornBookWorm! (Good name, dude) Are you really just thirteen, mate? Because you my friend, should be working somewhere out there in the media, coming up with taglines. Her ...

    Jul 2, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Fantasy Re: The Chains of Duty Chapter 4: Darkness

    Hey Confused! Back for your fourth chapter. It appears to be incredibly short though, so there's not too much I can comment on. I've reviewed every chapter up until this ...

    Jul 2, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Fantasy Re: The Chains of Duty Chapter 3:The Twins

    Hey Confused! Back to review your third chapter. I'm real sorry it took so long for me to get around to it. I've been quite busy lately. Without hesitation, let's ...

    Jun 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Snow: The Tale of A Cold Heart (Part VIII)

    Hey Silver! You've got another chapter going on, that's awesome! In this one we return to a character that has only had one POV so far, so it was definately ...

    Jun 16, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Vampirisi; 2.2

    Hey Cesare! I apologize for taking so long to get to this chapter; I've been quite busy lately, you see. So, as usual, despite your chapter being fairly short, a ...

    Jun 13, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Endless

    Hey Silver! You wrote a short story, that is awesome! I'll be doing a quick review here. Well, I really liked this. A short, experimentation on the notion of writing ...

    Jun 7, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Time would not stop.

    Hey Retro! Now, I'm not the biggest poetry fan, and rarely do I review it. However, I'm doing that tonight. Maybe it's because it gives me this unique distinction that ...

    Jun 6, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Bloodbath

    Hey Buggie! This was a pretty interesting read, I enjoyed it a lot. I would have liked it a lot more if you upped the realism and toned down the ...

    Jun 5, 2014


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