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Re: My Journey
hey, I'm bee, here to review you! firstly, i have to say that this is a very beautiful poem with the right use of grammar and figures of speech. "Two ...
Dec 9, 2013 -
Re: a song i wrote for austin mahone
boohoo!!, this is great. I'm bee, and this is your review! firstly, let me start by saying "it's great that you love Avril Lavigne and Austine Mahone, 'cause, i do ...
Dec 9, 2013 -
Re: Reality
wow! beautiful.........i can't believe you're this awesome, I'm the awesome one......OK sorry, I'm getting carried away hello, I'm bee! this is a beautiful piece, like the person below said, the ...
Dec 9, 2013 -
Re: My Friend in the Mirror
What happened after "you" didn't show up? why didn't "she" show up? OK, I'm getting carried away. Hello, Bee here to review this! Firstly, it was a very capturing piece ...
Dec 6, 2013 -
Re: Do you know that feeling?
Hello, bee here to review! Yeah, i know that feeling, i know everybody else does, that's what makes this story great. i can't believe none of them are accepting their ...
Dec 5, 2013 -
Re: Incendiary
My breath is caught in throat, my throat is bitter from unshed tears, this is painfully beautiful. How did you come up with this? I would want to hear you ...
Dec 5, 2013 -
Re: Sonnet #69
hi, I'm bee i certainly don't have a dirty mind, it's hard to keep it that way, what's with "69" ? someone tell me you also wanted to ask that. ...
Dec 4, 2013 -
Re: And I held You
:'( oh my God! you wrote this? do you sing? can i steal the lyrics? perfect oh, so perfect! how can you evoke so much emotion, so easily, it's so ...
Dec 3, 2013 -
Re: The Puzzle
puzzling :D brilliantly put together. i can't say i didn't enjoy this. it was a rush of emotions, sad, real. to use abstract to describe reality, it's not easily obtainable. ...
Dec 2, 2013 -
Re: Explosions
hello, bee here for a review! wow! it took a while to snap out of "the mood". it confused me at first, a little, i don't know why, maybe i ...
Dec 2, 2013 -
Re: Don't Smile
this is really interesting. the vampire theme, i totally love it! i really think you did a good job making an impressive story line of your own. i really wished ...
Nov 30, 2013 -
Re: In My Eyes Chapter 1
hi, i'm bee this, firstly, is very depressing :'( you write with so much emotion, i feel sad just like i'm sure the main character's feeling. is she going to ...
Nov 30, 2013 -
Re: Broadcasted
hello! beeyaay here for the review, actually, just call me bee! firstly, the change of flow of this poem is quite interesting, not too much of emotion here (that may ...
Nov 29, 2013 -
Re: Kage (Shadow)
I'm not too into poetry so i cannot really say much about this. it does have a very Japanese feel to it, maybe it's because i watch too much anime. ...
Nov 28, 2013 -
Re: The Existence of God
Timmy Jake, let me start by saying, i do completely agree with this and it's not just because i am christian. secondly, i really think you should work on your ...
Nov 28, 2013
