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The point of view of this poem is a bit confusing, or maybe it is just my interpretation. For example, you say " I stand at your side, playfully punching ...

I can tell that this poem is filled with strong feelings, and I have felt them too. I can definitely relate to this poem, and I think it was well ...

Please don't be offended by my critique, it's just I have strong feelings for Columbine. .I don't quite understand this poem. Who is it dedicated to? That line didn't flow ...

I think this poem was really heartfelt and moving. The only critique I have is make it longer. This poem could be so much longer and a lot more enjoyable ...

I loved this poem, it has a great message and it really displays how someone will be there to accompany you in your fall. The only critique I have is ...

Lovely. This poem was definitely written from the heart, and I loved how you wrote it. The one thing I will comment on is the last stanza. It is out ...

This is a hilarious poem. Nice and humorous, with a very lighthearted feel. Now to the review. Your empowering ability to create these conflicting emotions inside me is admirable. I ...

This Poe was really good, with a good theme and I flowed pretty well for the most part. The last stanza was sad, but happy at the same time and ...

That was amazing! I love how you Make the poem sound dark, but then you spin t make. April Fools day! I love the rhyme scheme and the stanzas, overall ...

This poem was really a poem of goodness. You really highlighted the problems a lot of people face, and this is one of the better poems I have read like ...

This was a great poem, it was ver unique and I liked that. You really put a lot of emotion into it, and that was good too. Really, the only ...

Hi! A, from what I understood, the main point of this poem was to comment on how the world has fallen to despair, using the figurative saying that we cannot ...

The format of this poem was a bit different, but I liked he way you did it. I have to congratulate you in the figurative language, referring to Pandora's box. ...

This poem was a nice trip from the norm. It was funny and energetic, but I'm not sure it really stayed on topic. You wen from England to your cat, ...

This was a very good piece, you really demonstrated who white haunts the main character, and I liked that. You gave good examples of white being everywhere, and I loved ...