I can tell that this poem is filled with strong feelings, and I have felt them too. I can definitely relate to this poem, and I think it was well written, except for a few lines that need minor editing. The last line would make more sense if you added an "and" at the beginning, so you are including it in the last statement. Lastly, the second line needs a period at the end. That's all, amazing poem!
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