babygirl12

I meant *Simple

Its sinple, but cute. Nice work!! :] Keep it up...

Wow, very nice. Its so true but yaah sometimes it is sad. This is a peice of wisdom that everyone should listen to. Keep it up! :]

:] nice...I like this. keep it up! :]

Nice, very nice for 2 minutes. I do think that it would be a little better if you extended it. made it a little longer. but its good. keep it ...

Aww! lol. This is very good. Most people try something like this and it turns out completely cheesy. But you did well. Keep it up! :)

Thanks for the comments. And I guess it didn't cross my mind to seperate them into stanzas. But I see how it could've helped. Thanks again for the encouragements. :)

thank you, I wasn't really sure about this poem at first honestly. But thank you for the encouragement...:)

Hey there, I really like this piece. Its very well put. I'm not good at spotting out the wrong I'm just gonna say It is really good. Keep up the ...

Once again i see where the changes could be....thanx for the encouragements also...:) and of corse i will keep writing =P

Its really good..:) keep up the good work..

Dang, this is really good. Its very descriptive (I think that's how you spell it) Its very good... I love it when it much inspiration... ha anyways ... keep up ...

Thankyou so much...:) this was actually an anssignment....then again i did it on my own free will...but i had the subject picked for me...and the word i was write about ...

Dang... talk about a bad dump... i would've hated to be that girl... poor her...

Dang...if only everyone listened to those two lines.... how different this world would be.. :) very good...