Published April 22, 2010
Seeing you, makes me a starry eyed
Tool. Inject your dazzle, your haze.
All who see you are starry eyed.
Rendering us to do your every bidding.
Reaping our souls for you.
You are beatiful, madamoiselle.
Everyone agrees;
You are the fairest of them all.
Everyone knows;
Dancing with you will leave them starry eyed.
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Aww! lol. This is very good.
Most people try something like this and it turns out completely cheesy.
But you did well.
Keep it up!
This is pretty good work here, Biffle. Makes me curious who you wrote it about or if you just made it up though.
But anyway back to the point. Wait, i never had one. But that doesn't matter.
I love your writing so keep at it!
~Cassi