Love is Like the Rain!

I love the wording and whole idea of this, it's very clever. Reading the title I thought it would be horribly cliche (most things about love are, aren't they?) but this was sweet. There were parts that seemed a little off-rhythm in places, but now I think I'm just nit-picking. Great poem.

Very well written, and well thought out! You are very good at this, and it sounds like you've had some expierence??? I liked it.
Very very very true!
Good work.

I can relate to this pretty well. My relationship with my boyfriend has never been great. But after a while, you learn to enjoy it.

Similies is something I always really liked too!

But, the last two lines don't really rhyme that well. But, I know how rhyming is hard, so that's nothing to worry about.

Good Job!I really enjoyed reading it. (likes)

That was touching, and, another emotion undescribable. 9|10 stars! A little too sad...

Hi, I'm KD, an' I'll be your reviewer today! Welcome to the site.
I loved this. Wow, so true! This was cute, simple, and very well thought out. Don't have any critiques for you today! I'll leave that for a poetry person. *likes*

~KD

That was amazing! How did you get the idea for it?

Wow, very nice.
Its so true but yaah sometimes it is sad.
This is a peice of wisdom that everyone should listen to.
Keep it up!
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I like this, it has a different rhyming system that, though to some might sound forced, I see as an actual way of rhyming and therefore don't object to ^_^.

I really like the "You never go out and look for rain", and I loved how you wrapped the whole poem up at the end. The only thing I would suggest is that you break apart the longer lines into two sections, so instead of saying:

"IT will make everything amazing, better than it was before,"

You'd say:

"It will make everything amazing,
Better than it was before,"

Altogether, really enjoyed it- keep writing!

~Mel

sad cause its true. You are good at this, you connect with your emotions well... your very deep into a level that many may never understand. Every one experiences rain in there life, just like they experience sadness and anger, its the human condition. Its inhuman to never be sad, but i do like the rain, especially in a romantic or suspenseful setting, yes even the time me and my friend fought in the drizzle, i couldn't get over the pure... Artistry of it all. This poem brings me back to those damp times that lead to the truth and happiness i feel today. *LIKES*