babydollblues

@marmalade

As the previous reviewer said, you used quite a bit of repetition throughout. While sometimes repetition can be worn out and overused, this works well with the flow of your ...

I loved your poem and the subject of it. The poem had a very calm feeling to it, very 'sit back and take everything in'. The only problem I had ...

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I don't see quite a bit of haiku poems on here so I commend you on being unique in this aspect. Haiku poems can be a bit tricky with content ...

I've got to be honest with you, I don't know much about Hamilton but I like your poem and I feel like I needed to review. First off, the repetition ...

And the copper smell is indeed just blood or an injury, nothing too deep there.

Ah! Thank you for pointing out the misuse of too, I would have never noticed! As for the confusion with the narration and the people, that was purposefully done, why ...

I'm going to start with what I like about your poem and end with what i would suggest changing. Your use of repetition was well-used, phenomenal in fact. Using "She's ...

Hoo boy, I haven't wrote a review in quite some time so please bear with me. First off, I would like to tell you this poem really spoke to me ...

In the last line, "And I'm actually just a few notes short of a composure.", I wasn't meaning an actual composure. The narrator in this line is revealing that they're ...

It's fine to project yourself onto a poem, it's a form of writing that's meant to connect. I like your idea even though it's not really what this is about ...

I loved your rhyme scheme, it really brought the whole poem together. I particularly liked the last few lines of your poem. Comparing the lady or person in question to ...

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Your friend's poem is written nicely but the format can use a little work. They have a lot of lines and it really needs punctuation to fit them all together, ...

This poem was very well put together! I enjoyed reading it and the only thing I really have a problem with is the bouncing themes but it is mostly an ...

I'm talking about the human capability of narcissism and self love to the extreme, a god like complex, although your idea of lust is interesting. Thank you for your review!