babydollblues

This is a very well put together poem! There is only a few minor tweaks I would add, dealing with spacing and such. First issue, Descriptive words. I like your ...

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Hello there, 567ajt. In the name of the Knights of the Green Room and our Most Sacred and Tireless Quest to ensure that no works go unreviewed in the realm ...

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Should I forget? Layered in regret? Ouch. These lines. They feel like a forced rhyme. Which makes no sense because the rest of this stanza doesn't rhyme. Which makes these ...

This really reminded me of a poem I wrote but I like your poem a whole lot better. You handled this topic in a very gentle and melancholic way, its ...

WOWIE So, the bed part about this poem is the rhyme scheme. The words flow so well because of it, not to mention your choice of words, which helps the ...

That was so good!! I adore the idea of Alice being too imaginative! "In future Alice, watch your step, there are way too many rabbit holes, you never know when ...

This poem is kind of all over the place. You have a lot of good descriptive usage of words but there's no pattern, really no theme that I can discern. ...

I like the concept of your poem but the execution of it was a bit choppy. You have very good lines here, ones that need a connection of some kind ...

I thought this was going to have an unpleasant ending because I'm jaded but I was met with a nice surprise. Your use of descriptive and rhyming words really make ...

Your poem is very peaceful and melancholic. From my understanding, I think this poem is about a friend who either is dying or wants to, I'm probably completely wrong though. ...

I really love this poem, the way you used the moon as a symbol to describe a lover was creative. I especially love the lines 'the moon reminds me that ...

The concept of your poem is very good, but the execution of it could have been carried out a bit better. I like the two first sentences together, they're not ...

okay. wow. wow. wow. This is beautiful and I loved every second of it. It was sad, it was ethereal, it was everything I could have hoped for in a ...

The imagery really stands out in this piece and I can really visualize a dark forest scene with a wax encrusted altar. "when the corpse is laid, that recently did ...

The emotion and thought that was put into this piece is absolutely breathtaking. You really excelled with the rhyming couplets, it brought the whole work together. Don't get me started ...