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Hi, @felistia! Atlas here to review the second chapter of your novel, The Quest for Fire as requested. Before I begin. I want to remind you that my critiques are ...

Hi, @felistia! Atlas here to review the first chapter of your novel, The Quest for Fire as requested. Before I begin. I want to remind you that my critiques are ...

Hi, NivedaJames22! Atlas here to review your poem, For the Want of Bread and Jam . Before I begin, I just want to remind you that anything I critique is ...

Hi, @hannah0528 and @MapleWay! Atlas here to review your poem, Warmth . Before I begin, I just want to remind you that anything I critique is merely a suggestion, so ...

Hi, Emivanz1! I'm Atlas, here to review your short story, Welcome To wonderland pt 1. Before I begin, I want you to know that everything I mention here is merely ...

Hi, Rohan! Atlas here for my first review of 2021! Today I'm reviewing your poem, An unwritten song. I want to make it known that all of my statements in ...

Hi, Morrigan! Atlas here to review your poem, A poem that would horrify my mother . I want to make it known that all of my statements in this review ...

Hi, Tuckster! Atlas here to give your poem, Pen Pricks a quick review. All of my statements are mere suggestions, so feel free to completely disregard them if you'd like. ...

Hi, nykolasandrews! I'm Atlas, and I'm stopping by to give your poem, bloodlust a quick review. I haven't done this in a while, so sorry if I'm a bit rusty. ...

Hi, Stellarjay! I'm Atlas, popping in to give your poem, Joyfull , a quick review. I haven't done this in a while, so forgive me if I'm a bit rusty. ...

Hi, madisonperkins59! I'm Atlas, and I'm stopping by to give your poem , Distanced , a quick review. I haven't done this in a while, so forgive me if I'm ...

Hi, StreetRat! I'm Atlas, and I'm here to give your poem, J.R.T. , a quick review. I haven't done this for a while, so I may be a little rusty. ...

Hi Ollie! Shane here to review Chapter 4.2 of Too Much Blank Space, Not Enough Vomit. Sorry it took a little while; I didn’t get home until late yesterday. Also, ...

Hi, Ollie! Shane here for that review you requested. As I've said, I've been following this work for a while, and I've really enjoyed it. Let's get to it! Overall ...

Hi, Caitlyn; I'm Shane! Welcome to YWS, and congrats on your first review star! I'm here to provide a (hopefully) helpful review to your poem, Falling. My Overall Thoughts I ...