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hi!! ash here for a little review. okay, first things first. this is a very interesting poem, talking about maybe a cheating partner, or just someone that drifted away from ...

hi! ash here :) this short little poem has a lot of depth beyond the words on the page. well done :) i don't know much about rhyme schemes but ...

hi chem! it's time for an ash review :) okay. this poem is very intriguing, by which i mean there's a lot of deeper meaning here that i need multiple ...

ash here :) hi pebble! i really love this poem. i feel numb and empty a lot and sometimes i need a reminder to just appreciate the little things, so ...

hey! you might be my favorite artist ever now. this poem is genuinely beautiful. really amazingly well done :) where do i start? the poetic symbolism? the message that love ...

hey sky! this poem is really cool :)) it describes a toxic relationship really powerfully. first off, i like the words that are in between the stanzas, they all rhyme ...

hey! ash here! just dropped by the green room for a quick review and came across this gem of a piece. i love this work a lot. if you watch ...

i love it :) i feel like the four lines after the first musical break would be more of a bridge than a verse, but other than that it's very ...

snoink!! this is amazing!! i was CAPTIVATED. i love the flowy, fluent first perspective and how the detective’s matter-of-fact perspective contrasts it. it’s so yummy! okay starting with miss gert

okay first off, I LOVE THE UNDERTALE REFERENCE IN THE LAST LINE. OH MY GOD PERFECTION. this poem is also really powerful in a lot of ways. well done! the ...

hey man! this poem is really neat! it captures the feeling of being in love really well. the feeling that it doesn't make sense but makes sense at the same ...

WOWOOWOW this idea and concept is so cool! beautiful execution, love the negative side being revealed after cmd+a being used. this is so cool OMGGGG your words have indeed made ...

WOW. that story was not at all what I was expecting. there's definitely a vision here, and it's gory, sick, and delightfully twisted. however, i do have some critiques here ...

this poem is so neat :) it has a powerful message about how hard being attached to somebody broken can be. the last line hits so hard, it shows truly ...

hey! i love this poem so much :) it reminds me of like, Frankenstein in a weird way. i really like the imagery in this poem, "until I can’t tell ...