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Hello, I’m here to review again! She still couldn't picture it. Her in a bed with another man, a murderer no less. In this paragraph, you have a chance to ...

Hello there, I’m here to review! I liked it—a lot. I can relate to it because I have been in such a situation. However, I felt that you could have ...

Hello, I’m here to review! First, let’s start with the improvements you can make. "Bwehhh!" I was standing over the toilet, my father standing behind me. "Wow, what did you ...

I have read the previous chapters and I’m here to review! First of all, I have to admit. That’s an interesting dream you’ve had. It’s full of action (as expected) ...

Hiya! I’m back. In the last review, I mentioned that dialogues for each character should be on a new line. This is to avoid confusion from your reader. Please take ...

Hello! I was looking through the books section and came across your chapter. It sounded interesting, so I decided to review it. I like that you started off the chapter ...

Hello! As promised, I’m here to review. Please bear in mind that I haven’t read the previous chapters and, thus, I might not be able to help you as you ...

Hiya! Since this chapter’s still in the Green Room, I decided to review it. :) I noticed that you used few paragraphs from the last chapter and I’d suggest you ...

Hello, I’m here to review! I haven’t read your previous chapters and, therefore, my review will only be based on this one. Please excuse me if I point out anything ...

Hello, I’m here to review! :) You can post as many chapters as you like; that’s entirely up to you. I’ve seen that people usually update their books once a ...

Hiya, I’m here for a quick review! She took a deep breath and clutched the knife that was in her right hand a little tighter. It’s a little too wordy. ...

Hello, I’m here to review! I’m afraid I haven’t read the previous chapters and, thus, my review will be only focused on this one. I noticed a couple of grammar, ...

Hiya! I’m here to review. I haven’t reviewed any scripts lately, so excuse me if I’m a little rusty. First of all, and I’m sorry if I sound nitpicky here, ...

Hello, I’m here to review! I haven’t read the first chapter and, therefore, my review will be based on only this one. First of all, I noticed a lot of ...

Hello, I’m here to review! I haven’t read your earlier chapters, so my review will only be based on this one. First of all, I don’t understand why you think ...