arianaSarroyo

Hello so first off I think you have some nice ideas here. Out of curiosity, what exactly is this about? I felt a bit confused. Why do they need to ...

This is beautiful and right up my alley. I love to see poems about subjects such as this "Light in the darkness". I love that verse, it's so poetic. It ...

Wow... I don't want to sound like I'm just throwing fluff at you but really. I love this. From the beginning I was drawn in from looking at the title. ...

Hi there? First off, I must admit I liked this. However, the YWS format of no stanzas threw me off.

Hello there and happy Review Day! Okay, so today I'm going to submit another review. I think you have a lovely start here full of messages of good hopes, courage ...

Hi there. My name is Ariana Simone and I'm going to review your poem today! :) Okay, well, to start off, I really liked this. It is short but sweet ...

Hi there! I would like to introduce myself before diving into this poem. My name is Ariana and I'm going to take a stab at this. :) So first off, ...

Hello there and happy review day! Okay, first to start off, as almost everyone else has said before, your formatting was different. However, different isn't always necessarily a negative thig. ...

Hi there! I'm going to attempt to review this poem today. To start off, I like the concept. It is sweet and as you said genuine and from the heart. ...

Hi there tgirly! I am going to attempt to post a review today. I'm not great at reviewing but I'll give it a try. :-) Anyway, to start off, you ...

Wow! I was impressed! Excellent figurative language as well as vocabulary. Your overall emotional execution here was splendid. The ending was what really put me on edge though. My favorite ...

Hello there! This is Ariana S with your review for today! Awesome start, I must say. However, something seems to have been missing. Again you were off to a fairly ...

Hello there! Ariana with your review today. So first off, you had me hooked. After reading the first few lines, I expected something else. Something more pleasant and sweet. Obviously ...

Hello there! :) to start off, I must say that I was definitely a fan of this. Just the way it was written reminded me of one of my only ...

Hello! First I must say... I was pleasantly surprised! I can't say this is what I was expecting, but I ended up being happy with what I saw instead. I ...