Hi there? First off, I must admit I liked this. However, the YWS format of no stanzas threw me off. <-(
This piece is full of many positive aspects such as lovely, strong imagery and a strong, thoughtful ending. It was also a bold testement of your faith put into words, which not everyone can do. However, there were negative aspects.
To start off, there were no stanzas! I imagine this isn't your fault though. But, beauyiful as it was, this piece was littered with dreadful and annoying spelling errors. For instance, is meany supposed to be many? Also I believe reunited is one word. There may be a dash there, I'm not sure.
But there isn't anything some spell checks and re-reading can't fix, I don't think.
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